Mark Dewey

"Hollwood Insider Newsletter"

By Mark Dewey

   on Mar 02, 2010
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Concept Reviews

  • Stewart Whaley

    Stewart Whaley

    Rank: 4 Master

    126

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes

    Looks good. Like the header. I am assuming for sake of a mockup that the 'Subscribe Here' box is white you just wanted to see how it looks. If it would follow the same colour scheme as the rest of the page I would think it would look better.

    • Mark Dewey
      Mark Dewey commented:
      Posted: on Mar 02, 2010 at 4:06 PM

      Thank you, I will look at that again. I never thought of that.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Detail work needed

    Posted on Mar 02, 2010 at 9:34 AM

    This is a good rough start but there are a few things that need some work:

    1. The green label on the left hand corner doesn't look right. Make it look more realistic.
    2. Think about putting the background swirls on the header behind the entire page as a more prominent background texture.
    3. The date tab looks a little strange. It doesn't actually look like it is folding around the top.
    4. The links are overlapping the tab at the bottom.
    5. Give the tab at the bottom of the post the same style as the top tab.
    6. Your right column is too detailed. Make it more simple so it doesn't take more focus then the content area. 7 Keep working on the footer, looks very plain
    7. Put a subtle drop shadow on the entire page so it pops off a bit.
  • Nick Glavin

    Nick Glavin

    Rank: 2 Titan

    CF Verified professional

    980

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes

    Newsletter subscriptions looks like it has been un-styled it introduces blue not used any where else on the site maybe the orange from the tabs would work a little better over there or the green from the top corner. Can you get an images in those posts i feel the left column is just a little bare but coming along well