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This concept is a new version of an older concept. View Old Version
Font looks hand made and woody, which seems relevant for the purpose.
It looks a bit too spaced out though.
Also the big 'B' look like it is the start for both words.
The holes in the letters, especially the B could be a tad bigger I think, if that is printed it may fill in.
Seems a little strange that you join the d's and not the L's.
A nice logo though.
I would take this logo outside of the box. Just use green text with the crank. I think putting it in a box takes away from the look of it.
Thanks Nate. I have to back to the previous version, without box.
I love this~ i love the playful typeface & crank on the B. there was confusion with the connected d's and the B at the start of "kids" i would even suggest letting wood grain show on the letters, and maybe use additional colors or show the logo working with any color. you don't have to settle on only green. i like the size of the dots in the letters. id like to see the crank animated & spinning.. great job, keep pushing it further
The concept is awesome and give the feel that it is for kids... and thats a concept should message.
well, i m also having the same issue of clarity with "B"... we can read it as we read BALDU KIDS written but think... when someone will open that website and it will be a kid... he/she will be confused with the name... the "B" will look to him/her like a top with key and he/she will just ream "aldu kids" all in small letter and in line.
so try to make it clear for kids as well... because you are making it finally for them.
best of luck
It works - I think it just needs minor changes. Agree with the comments to unjoin the letters and increase the 'hole' size in all of the letters.
I can only see one logo. My only problem is it is very difficult for me to read the text I would say make the text more readable.
I read Baldu Kids -- is that what it's suppose to say? I like the feel of the logo but to me it's unreadable.
I think it's a cute concept but a little difficult to read. I would add another color or a little more dimension, seems unfinished. I would not join the d's, gets too confusing. Nice start but needs finishing.
I find this color/brightness combo hard on the eyes, otherwise like I said in the previous concept, I love it!
Cheers
Noel
Thank you Chris, for your helpful suggestions! I'll try to improve in next version.