Demi Livshits

Baldu Kids

By Demi Livshits

   on Feb 23, 2010
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Concept Reviews

  • Jon Spooner

    Jon Spooner

    Rank: 2 Titan

    681

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    I like C.

    Posted on Feb 23, 2010 at 2:15 PM

    the split d on the top is a bit confusing as the lower d doesn't follow the same convention.

    and the taller assenders on version B make it feel like it is stretching the B apart. dunno if that makes sense? and the deeper u looks more like a u than a v. the combined d looks a bit odd. I tried breaking that apart in an attached graphic. did not really work out as I thought.. but it is attached nonetheless.

    • baldu.jpg
  • Daniel Pataki

    Daniel Pataki

    Rank: 3 Superior

    431

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Slightly less fat

    Posted on Feb 24, 2010 at 1:43 AM

    Hi Demi! Upon looking at the review by Jon, I'd use the version he has attached with the different D on kids.

    Otherwise, I like the overall feel of the logo. However, it does give me the feeling of "designer stuff for kids" as opposed to "kids stuff for designers", but this is not my area of specialty, so I may be completely off here.

    One thing I would change is make it ever so slightly less fat. While clear, I find the "u" and "s" a bit too chunky.

    One more option you could look into is making the "k" in kids curve in a bit. the a in "Baldu" follows the upper curve of the be, so the outline of the "k" in kids could slightly follow the concave curve of the bottom part of the "B". This might add some more flow into the design.

    Hope I could help!

    • Demi Livshits
      Demi Livshits commented:
      Posted: on Feb 24, 2010 at 4:04 AM

      Thank You, Daniel! I'll try to improve it and make the lowercase less fat.

  • Noel Tock

    Noel Tock

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    4065

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Nadda..

    Posted on Feb 24, 2010 at 6:32 AM

    I really like the third, very easy to read and lovely design in general.

    Nice work!