Oliver Martin

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By Oliver Martin

   on Jul 15, 2009
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  • Nate Johnson

    Nate Johnson

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    Really like the direction

    Posted on Jul 15, 2009 at 3:21 PM

    The top needs some work, and the wallpaper bg is a bit too busy and distracting. Other than that I really like the direction and the font treatment with the highlights for next to the video.

    Keep working on this. Very nice.

    • Oliver Martin
      Oliver Martin commented:
      Posted: on Jul 15, 2009 at 3:25 PM

      Thanks Nate. I hope to get the kinks ironed out, especially the busy bg. I'm not sure how to make it less busy but still have a reason to use the background colour for the links to the right of the video player.

      There is a balance but not sure what it is yet :)

    • Joel Glovier
      Joel Glovier commented:
      Posted: on Jul 16, 2009 at 12:25 PM

      Here's a couple ideas for the busy background (because I think it's a nice texture, but agree it is a bit buys): 1. try using a more subtle color treatment such as reducing the opacity of the background over another color. 2. try reducing the scale of the pattern 3. try reducing the contrast of the pattern if you can edit it. For example, a black background with the pattern in dark grey, or a white background, with the pattern in light grey, or else some other appropriate colors like orange with the pattern as a darker orange. (sorta the same as my first suggestion just a different technique).

  • Bart B

    Bart B

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    1 Vote
    Distracting background

    Posted on Jul 15, 2009 at 8:22 PM

    This bg is just taking the attention from where you want it- I'd suggest you to change it. You may also consider slightly rebuilding the top- the menu looks quite outdated compared to the rest of your design.

    • Oliver Martin
      Oliver Martin commented:
      Posted: on Jul 16, 2009 at 9:51 AM

      Yeah I'm beginning to see the flaws with the background. Also the header is not exactly right, I found that when trying to add the navigation elements.

  • Kyle Reddoch

    Kyle Reddoch

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    1 Vote
    Wallpaper Background

    Posted on Jul 15, 2009 at 9:45 PM

    I really have to say that the background that you have on there takes the attention away from the meaning of the site and directs it straight to the bg. Plus, the bg colors and design is not consistent with the rest of the site. It looks as if it was just placed there.

    You are going in the right direction with the website. I would suggest changing the background to a light gray or so. That will contrast with the rest of the site colors.

    • Oliver Martin
      Oliver Martin commented:
      Posted: on Jul 16, 2009 at 9:52 AM

      Same as above, thanks for re-confirming the need to change the background. I will give your suggestion a try and upload a new preview for you and others in a few minutes.

  • Joel Glovier

    Joel Glovier

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    1 Vote
    probably just the background

    Posted on Jul 16, 2009 at 12:27 PM

    Like the minimalism. Really works on this site.

    • Oliver Martin
      Oliver Martin commented:
      Posted: on Jul 16, 2009 at 2:39 PM

      Thank you, I chose to revise the bg after it was pointed out and white/grey is always a winner for a clean and simple design.

      Thanks for the comment

  • Joel Acevedo

    Joel Acevedo

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    0 Votes
    get rid of the background

    Posted on Jul 24, 2009 at 8:36 AM

    Background in first concept is too distracting.

    The header needs some work...

    Everything else looks good to me.

    • Oliver Martin
      Oliver Martin commented:
      Posted: on Jul 24, 2009 at 7:16 PM

      I have already made the change you suggested. Take a look at the other screenshots below the first one. They show the background "wallpaper" is now a tidy and simplistic gradient (white - light grey).

      Would appreciate a response to new background, no-one else has come back and looked at my updates yet :(

    • Joel Acevedo
      Joel Acevedo commented:
      Posted: on Jul 27, 2009 at 9:37 AM

      Looks better now. I think the header needs some work. Try to re-arrange the content of the header - specially the links on the right side.

  • roberto ellero

    roberto ellero

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    0 Votes
    tapestry background is not good

    Posted on Aug 01, 2009 at 1:33 PM

    I prefer the second version. £ parts are not well related, I see only the central area

    • Oliver Martin
      Oliver Martin commented:
      Posted: on Aug 01, 2009 at 7:14 PM

      Can you elaborate on "£ parts are not well related, I see only the central area", as I'm not sure what you mean. Thx

  • Ali Kasimoglu

    Ali Kasimoglu

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    0 Votes
    lol

    Posted on Sep 04, 2009 at 1:47 PM

    i like it