Chana Rochel

Pocketee - Logo for T-Shirt Product

By Chana Rochel

   on Feb 18, 2010
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  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Not working

    Posted on Feb 18, 2010 at 12:52 PM

    I like the idea that you have come up with here but don't think that the execution is quite right yet. Without reading the explanation, I couldn't really understand what the logo was. I would try some different imagery focusing on the pocket of the tshirts. Keep working on this concept.

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    pocket...what?

    Posted on Feb 18, 2010 at 1:10 PM

    I read your synopsis, and nowhere do I get that this design has any attributes to pockets.

    I would change the name and call it 'cubetee' because you're packaging it in a cube, in small cubes, then you could come up with a funky as 3d logo to sit on the side or around the packaging (almost like you have to pick up the cube and turn it all the way around to read it)

    The font you have chosen is fairly dull and not that inspiring, do a little bit more research, into different fonts. You really want one that pops!

    Good Luck!

  • Kirill Kedrinski

    Kirill Kedrinski

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    Color

    Posted on Feb 18, 2010 at 2:17 PM

    Play with color of black shape. And what about theme? What does this logo mean?

  • Olly Bowman

    Olly Bowman

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    name

    Posted on Mar 12, 2010 at 11:51 AM

    i like the idea of a 3d cube.

    how about BoxTee for a name.