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Concept Reviews
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love the halftone. and the first one.
maybe make the H capital. looks like a b with the dot and all...
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letty verhoeve commented:
Gave a look to this logo some more times and it starts working now. The first one I like best. It has some jumpy happyness in it. Well done :) No longer individuals with same jackets but happy persons jumping together.
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i like first and last. Only one thing - play with colors. Now it seems too disorganized and blured. Nice concept I like this idea so much!))
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I like the idea behind the name and the colors and whimsical feeling you have going here. However, you need to work on your readability and busyness of the design. Keep tweaking this a bit...
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I love the concept, and the first one is definitely my favorite. The colors just work. Great job! :)
The only things that throw me off are the two dots on the bottom of the H and the W. I feel like they make the design a bit unbalanced. If you got rid of them, I think it would add to readability and balance.
(I don't even know if you need dots by every letter, though I understand the focal point reference.)
Overall, I really do like it though. Good luck :)
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love this logo as it is and i don't even have to know what it means :D
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I'm going to have to side with Yitz on this one. The H should probably be changed to a capital. I first read it as ARTBROW. (made me think Highbrow Art)
I do, however, appreciate the concept and the creativity. This is a really inspiring piece.
I'd stick with the first set, and perhaps give it some dimension...? who knows.
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graham young commented:Nice work, and I agree with the posts above that the lower case "h" appears as a "b" with the dot in it. Either remove the dot or make the "h" uppercase
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As I understand it this logo has to reflect the idea of connectivitity and togetherness. The letters now are not connected at all (only in style). They are more like disconnected individuals, wearing the same jacket. Connectivity is only to be found in the meaning of the word arthrow itself, to my opinion. I would connect the letters in a funny/funky way to get concept/logo/name in the same wave of connectivity an see what will happen to the design.