Valmir Jr

Web Designer Freelancer (personal)

By Valmir Jr

   on Feb 17, 2010
6 Reviews2 Votes0 Favorites479 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Yitz Woolf

    Yitz Woolf

    Rank: 1 Elite

    937

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    2 Votes
    very professional

    Posted on Feb 17, 2010 at 2:54 PM

    It's very professional and nice.

    It's also a bit too cold. It looks like you are selling software. The sites in the top and portfolio section are all similar and sparse and serious.

    Some suggestions:

    1. Maybe come up with a warmer logo - Your logo is a bit harsh.

    2. The colours - red, blue and black - are also a bit cold.

    3. Find some other work of yours that looks different - you definitely have a style but it seems like you have one style.

    It's a great site and you should be proud - my site is awful and I'm redesigning right now and desperately need help!

  • Norbert

    Norbert

    Rank: 1 Elite

    276

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    slim down the first page

    Posted on Feb 17, 2010 at 3:15 PM

    That's the first thing your visitors see, so I would keep everything the way it is, except in a more compact form, so you'd have the portfolio, services and the process in one row, each with links to their individual pages.

    People usually scan through pages, so if they see too much at first, they might be turned off. Give them a small amount and let them chew on it at their own pace. Otherwise a great design.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    It's almost there

    Posted on Feb 18, 2010 at 7:57 AM

    There is a lot that is done very well on this, however, i think overall you have flooded it with too many different elements. When you look at all the different elements, they can stand on their own. However, in grouped together in a site like this is just bit much. I would simplify things considerably.

  • Peter Georgiev

    Peter Georgiev

    Rank: 4 Master

    635

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    ;p

    Posted on Feb 18, 2010 at 8:14 PM

    It's clean and simple.

  • Duane Cilliers

    Duane Cilliers

    Rank: 5 Advanced

    59

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Nothing!!!

    Posted on Feb 19, 2010 at 3:25 AM

    I can't find anything that I would change on this design. I might do it differently, but you've pulled off this simplistic feel brilliantly :)

  • Benjamin Charity

    Benjamin Charity

    Rank: 2 Titan

    531

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Separation?

    Posted on Feb 17, 2010 at 2:48 PM

    A really really great site my friend. Well done. Clean and simple.

    If anything I would say that one of the sections could have an image or color background to help separate you page a bit. But you'd have to be careful as it would be really easy to move backward in your design at this point.