Vinicius Chaves De Andrade

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By Vinicius Chaves De Andrade

   on Feb 15, 2010
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  • Richard Theuws

    Richard Theuws

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    create a logo, not initials.

    Posted on Feb 16, 2010 at 5:45 AM

    I can see you're really skilled, but still, if you're a graphic designer people will judge you on your logo, and all other design matters.

    I'd recommend to really make it a logo in stead of just colored initials in a box.

  • Rudolf Boogerman

    Rudolf Boogerman

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    Lettering is great

    Posted on Feb 16, 2010 at 4:04 PM

    I love the headings. The logo itselfpulls the rest down indeed. I would make something abstract. Try to envisage the concepts "Art lover" and "Graphic". Use associative words until you come to some sort of abstraction and work that out.

    PS: try to kern the V a bit closer to the i. It is only a fraction.

  • Mr. Miracle!

    Mr. Miracle!

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    the VA letters color...

    Posted on Feb 15, 2010 at 4:10 PM

    This multicolor VA doesnt make it simple... I would prefer it with a plain simple color... You could choose a vibrant red!. Also i would use capital smaller letters for the "graphic designer...". GIve it a try...(?!)

  • Allwin Jeba

    Allwin Jeba

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    Length

    Posted on Feb 16, 2010 at 7:07 AM

    I think your logo size is too big.

    Try this layout

    Vinicius ooooo ooooo -> logo here ooooo Andrade

    I would agree to Richard's comment.. yeah you can have a logo instead of using initials. I guess an illustration of you holding a brush or pencil would look good :)

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Redesign your initials

    Posted on Feb 16, 2010 at 7:42 AM

    The "VA" is really pulling down the design. I love your font that you chose for you name and the subheading. Start over on the VA and think about using less colors. Right now it looks very Psychedelic and doesn't match the rest of the logo.. i would also make your subheading slightly larger and center it.

  • Ivaylo Sekolichki

    Ivaylo Sekolichki

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    The rectangle

    Posted on Feb 16, 2010 at 10:31 AM

    i would remove the Rectangle behind the initials, that might make it a little more clean.

    Adding some color to it is a good idea but i would decrease their number a little bit.

    I like the Fonts;)