logo design concept service ..... what area can be change?

For a logo design company i feel the weakest part of your design is the logo.

Other than that, i wouldn't change a thing.

Hi Vivek,

I like your concept here. What a great idea having the door at the bottom and viewing things from this perspective.

I would only consider adjusting a few things. The one, two, three and four, look different in color due to it's background. So, maybe making them white and pulling back the price color would be more ideal. Since you are trying to pull more attention to what you offer rather than the cost.

I would also consider left aligning your text block under "Logo Design Studio" unless, if you want to go in there and push those words closer together to each other (and change words so hyphens are not everywhere when you do so.) As it currently is, the gaps create rivers (gaps of space seen flowing down your text block, when you squint your eyes.) Also, the space created between the words stops the smooth flow of reading. Then to try and not have a word by itself at the end of a paragraph.

Maybe consider a different capret/background. This one reminds me of victorian wallpaper. As shag carpet relates to the 60's, you're sending a subtle message to your customers through its selection. I think the pattern on the carpet throws the perspective off a bit.

I like the steam coming from the coffee. Yet, the pencils seem very flat behind "NEED A LOGO?" area.

This is a really creative and different concept. The only thing that I don't like is the navigation bar. It just doesn't seem to fit in the design very well. Everything else looks really good, great work here...

You could be more creative with the menu. It should have unity and similarity with the rest of the content style. I don't know why the latest work is centered.

Good work!

Like it was already said, the man is not in the design spirit, looks like a mathematic teacher LOL However, I like the style used for your home, beatiful work.

Bye

Wonderful work, a totally new perspective..

The menu text could be better. I mean the typography..

Logo needs major change..

I think the whole focus of the site is being stolen by the guy.. you should make the guy point towards the package shifting customer's focus towards the package..

The contact form can have another text box as message.. where user can send a small text message or some quick note..

Other than that the table and door looks really well..

Good job!

I really like the design-concept and most of the elements you used, but I´d change the sitting man into something more "natural" to achieve an authentic impression.

You should change nothing. Very interesting concept and usable design. Congratulations!

I really like the website, nice colors, nice design, nice fonts - very structured.

Actually there is something i would change - the drop down menu is a little stiff for me, looks cut out; fading the upper part of the menu when you are over would make it a little better as it wouldn't be so edgy and it would flow into the wall. And maybe adding a little flash to the banner(making the steam from the coffee move, letting the figure blink from time to time or the plant move...) that would make it even more fresh. That's just an idea you don't have to follow it:) In general very cool website.

The site itself looks very cohesive and original. Love the colors and the rich feeling of it. I would just delete the man all together and I think that would improve the site tremendously. He is the only odd part of the design, the images are interesting enough to stand alone. I am also not a huge fan of the bubble that says Need a logo - maybe it could be a large post-it note, or just use typography to make it stand out. Great job!

There are so many little things to see that it kept my attention. Normally, I can't stand marketing clutter (ads, websites, etc...), but this is clean, reader-friendly and slightly amusing. Clive

I wouldn't change a thing.

This is really al that is needed for that kind of website.

Lots of attention to detail, and I can tell you tried to be unique. I'd say polish the man up as his posture looks a little off, but otherwise looks great!

WoW!! This is some of the most creative stuff I have ever seen. Sheers

I think the logo is really weak and does not look simple and professional enough for a logo design company. You should really work on that.

Also, visually atractive as the site may be, the page is too cluttered with "decorative" stuff which serves no clear purpose and distracts. You should show your work and portfolio big and up front. That's what I would hire you for.

Finally, add some call to action that's more engaging. You need clearly visible buttons to order your packages.

Cheers!

Great idea, the actual website looks even better because you have the sidewalls there. Congrats on pumping out an awesome piece

I haven't read all the reviews before me, so sorry if I'm repeating someone!

The main thing I'd do is take the person off completely, and just leave the chair. The image gives the feeling that you could be a lazy logo designer, while the empty chair concept is somehow much more appealing to me, I can't really say why.

I agree with many people before me, the logo is the weakest part, it's way too crowded for my taste.

Other than that, I do love the design, I might add a tiny bit more space between the columns. The footer is also awesome, good work!

The reason I gave a 3 for design is that some items on the desk seem a but too chunky to me. While I generally like the style (the folders, phones, monitor, tablet) some items seem a bit too icon-like. like the coffee mug and the plant. I would probably remove the trash can altogether.

I hope I could help a bit!

Very nice

I really like the colours you used, the illustrations are also really well done, but i would put more work in designing a new logo. Try maybe some icon or image to represent your company instead of LDS.

I like you idea, but did you agree with me there are many graphics on this web site. As everyone agree you need to change the man, also you need to work on the logo to be more attractive.

really nice and creative concept there.

considering what others have already said... I have this to add about the footer section

"a doormat is usually placed outside an exterior door for wiping the shoes before entering", now you have a mat that says "Come In" inside the room, but I'm seeing all these creative stuff 'cos i'm already in. Its just does not make right... if its indeed a mat.

Well done The best

I really like this... however i'd work on the illustration of you a little... looks like you are wearing lipstick.

No offense though if you are actually wearing lipstick.

Other than that i love it. Very original design. cool use of damask pattern as the carpet.

"2 business day" needs to be plural.

Pleaaaase change the Character i don't like him ! maybe you can use your own real photo ? and i agree with Alan , the logo isn't so clear.

And the Plant on the vase behind the monitor looks like seen from sides rather than from above

I didn't like the logo. I guess it's kind of hard to understand. And the number's color is looking a bit strange. I think you could make it a bit more clear. To contrast better with the background.

But in general, congratulations! You've done a great job.

I miss 'real' CTA buttons at the packages. Where do I click for a Basic Package?

also, I'd move the 4 step explanation to the top, so it's the first thing people see.

You might also want to move the form up (and the shirt down).

Seeing the header of the design, I just scrolled to see the footer, since sometimes people don't end it well, but from top to bottom, your design rocks.