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The "de" is too close to "Mexico". Try moving it the left a little. Also, have you tried using a little bit of both designs. Maybe a little of wave and little of bubbles on the second would look nice.
Great work.
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hey there,
Carlos said, i would also mix both.
i like te types on the second, although the "de" is to close to "méxico". but the wave not so much
i believe using the bubles on the second would work nice. also aplly some white spots on yhe bubles.. to make ti resemble soap ..
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I like the 1st one , as that fulfills your goals of simple screen printing with only one color and grey.
The bubbles definitely says cleaning more than the wave.
work on the kerning of the font in the 1st one and maybe make the 'o' in Mexico a bubble?
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Except for the font, I liked both ideas.
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turn it all to 3d by same prospective and fix the swoosh
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I find the second version more appealing, but I think it would be more pleasing if the text somehow conformed to the curve of the swoosh. Right now I find the squareness of the text jarring with the curve (as well as the trapped whitespace).
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The second concept isn't a bad direction. I like the typography for the most part but think you need work on the object. Make it less 3d and more smooth. You could also try some different imagery as well.
