Ad for Vimala Chocolate Bar

The poster feels a little squeezed with all of the elements that you are trying to stuff into it. I like the general design, try to shrink it to fit more within the poster though. You could also try some sort of very subtle background to make things more interesting.

Hi, Michelle!

I like your style and some of your typography. As for me there are to much fonts you used. Just take 2 of them.

Next, I like front elephants, but I don't like than you copied them all over the poster. Two in front — that's enough.

Some curves aren't smooth, now it looks inaccurate.

Colors are great and chocolate-full. It is right decision — not to show us a bar of chocolate.

You are on the right way, I am sure your ad will look awesome in a magizine :)

I think the ad would be a hundred percent better if you took out the smaller elephants. They are unnecessary and clutter up the ad. You're right though, the elephants are really cute. Just don't need them all. Less is more.

Also, you might want to clean up the points on either end of the big round thing in the center. Not sure what it is called. But the points don't really match up. Just something I noticed. And cocoa is spelled wrong.

Sorry, not trying to be nit-picky about it. But thought I should let you know.

I do really like your design. But it makes me think of cigars rather than chocolate. Perhaps you could change the brown you are using to a richer, darker colour more reminiscent of the dark chocolate you are selling.

I would also remove the small elephants, and add some really subtle Indian decorative features in/on/around the border to spice it up a bit.

Adams idea about the chocolate on their somewhere is a good one. Liquid chocolate ripple are popular on chocolate packets these days and there are plenty of photo-shop tutorials on how to make realistic looking ripples.

Really nice start here. Good luck with it's development.

What is spiced chai dark chocolate? 'imported exotic indian spices & cocao' also do not really make an impression that the ad is about a chocolate bar.

Where do I buy this bar? on the website? if so, why is the URL so small?

It's too crowded and there's too little clean space. Try making all the elements a little bit smaller and take a look at the little elephants. They aren't sitting well around there, try something else.