Kapil Dev

Updated Pricol Properties Homepage Redesign

By Kapil Dev

   on Feb 11, 2010
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  • Digital

    Digital

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    :(

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 3:07 PM

    Hi, at a first look, its appearing that.. all the elements has been taken from different sites and composed together.... as a whole none of the elements are matching with other.. or the consistency is missing. I think if you could use the lines / shadow in a minimize way. needs to fix the center slide area much cleaner. along with the buttons... several things are needs to re formatted. never mind... this was according to my observations. Thanks

  • Cedric Ruiz

    Cedric Ruiz

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    Good overall

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 4:02 PM

    I don't like the red button on the bottom. Drives too many attention.

  • Curtiss Prickett

    Curtiss Prickett

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    Find a better way to visually seperate the sections.

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 4:14 PM

    Overall, my first thought is that it looks a bit like a template. Not an uncommon thing in web design today so don't be offended if it's not. I'd like to see less focus on the giant graphic on the top. The item that has the least draw visually is the "Interested in Buying?" section. Isn't this the MOST important? I like the bar in the middle with the properties in thumbnail form, it's just not very visually interesting.

  • Ryan Hughes

    Ryan Hughes

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    Colors, Main Graphic, etc.

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    My biggest issue is with the main graphic. It is very clearly a Photoshop job. While there is nothing wrong with this, the blades of grass are knee high, that's somewhat odd looking. I also don't like how the people's heads bleed into the navigation portion. The text on the left on that graphic (green) is rather difficult to read on the sky background and the "Get Price Quote" button doesn't really stand out at all which I would imagine you would want to be a focus.

    All in all, a solid start but there are some elements of this design that need some serious work.

  • Michelle Rauh

    Michelle Rauh

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    Started pretty good

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 9:55 PM

    i agree about the Interested in buying property part, should get more attention. Head graphic is too big. Somehow I don't mind the weirdness of the grass in ratio to the people as much as how that whole part is composed, I like both of the images but maybe they just don't have to be together and if there are find a better composition. (I think I am just drawn to the greenness of that grass, why doesn't my lawn look like that, stupid snow) You seem to be really concerned about the organization of information at the top then loose it at the bottom. Making the upper half feel isolated from the bottom just by the difference in how its finessed.

  • Michael Howe

    Michael Howe

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    The Bottom Buttons Look Wrong!

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 10:04 PM

    I really like the design... the only things I'm not too sure about are the two buttons at the bottom.. they just look out of place!

  • Harish Chouhan

    Harish Chouhan

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    too many different things

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 11:07 PM

    The layout is nice, but the colour treatment, styling given to the sections, seem all different.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    A few things

    Posted on Feb 12, 2010 at 7:49 AM

    Great work so far, just a few items to think about:

    1. Make the heading "The joy of being together" stand out more, it's pretty hard to read.
    2. Rework the button, it is too hidden in the grass
    3. Move the "Find your location" below the map image so the map aligns better to the top.
    4. Separate your footer more from the rest of the design.

    Let me know if you have questions...

  • Peter Georgiev

    Peter Georgiev

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    ;p

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 2:58 PM

    Good structure of the elements. I can see the hierarchy. You definitely have a focal point. Proper choice of colors.

    I think the grass in the header is too big compared with the people on it. It seems unnatural. The heading color should be darken a little bit for better contrast. The three columns below have different height sizes. Better aligned could be done. The search bar also could be aligned with the right corner of the header.