Vlad Verde

Pilote auto ecole - identity + site design

By Vlad Verde

   on Feb 11, 2010
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Concept Reviews

  • Cedric Ruiz

    Cedric Ruiz

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Like the colors!

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 4:04 PM

    I like the colors but you could work a little more on the composition.

    • Vlad Verde
      Vlad Verde commented:
      Posted: on Feb 12, 2010 at 2:47 AM

      It's not straight forward, but it;s not unbalanced. I'll review it anyway when I'll deconstruct it for the build.

    • Vlad Verde
      Vlad Verde commented:
      Posted: on Feb 12, 2010 at 2:47 AM

      thanks

  • Lucas FéLix

    Lucas FéLix

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    I like it

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 8:45 PM

    I like the colors and the use of transparency. Looks very clean!

  • Harish Chouhan

    Harish Chouhan

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Nice Design

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 11:12 PM

    I liked the colours.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    1 Vote
    Typography & layout

    Posted on Feb 12, 2010 at 7:40 AM

    Your typography and layout are suffering a bit here. The layout feel random and awkwardly spaced. I like your background that you are using but would place the car somewhere other than behind your text. Just some thoughts, take them or leave them.

  • Jon Spooner

    Jon Spooner

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote

    Love the use of gradients and the hidden subtly of the car graphic.

    I like the layout it is very straightfwd and conveys the info well.

    One little touch that might be nice: have the car's lights flash randomly or animate a subtle reflection passing over the car body. Just to bring the users attention to the car being in the background. Nothing huge but a little bit of life around the car.