Invitation to Carolines 50th Birthday.

its very engaging! and nicely done, cool typography! awesome work!

I would make her more grainy, to match with the vintage feel :) Otherwise, great job!

the design is nice, the typography is cool...

the only thing I would watch is that logo at the top, I first read it as FrockRoll & Presents (Roll needs to bigger than presents!)

Also remember punctuation... caroline's (it's her birthday)

Nice One!

Great style and typography on this invite. Not really much I would change. The only thing I would say, make the "&" symbol at the top the same color red you used at the bottom. Great work!

You have got some style. Nice work.

This is an awesome invitation. Love the typography!

I dont think i can say anything bad about it awesome job!!

great design, only thing if i could point out is the photo of the lady could be better mixed and matched to gel with the overall image

oh i do love grunge designs! :) my first impression was a good one, this is a pretty nice design. i wish i'd get flyers for my birthday party. ;)

the typography is great, although the ampersand at the top is bugging me. it tilting to the side like that feels a bit off and i feel it's making the word "presents" look crowded.

one thing though, you said old school rockers is part of the target audience. my first impression of those fonts is country music.

what type of old school rock we talking here? 80's metal (megadeth metallica etc)? 70's classic rock?

the fonts and borders look great but they dont really say old school rock to me.

the textured background is perfect however.

i think i saw somewhere you said you were thinking about changing the lady's hair back to red, but keeping the rest black and white, i'd like to see that i think it would be an excellent touch.

Love it, absolutely love it!

The only thing I might try is blurring the background to make the eye focus on Caroline, make her pop.

OTOH it might work better this way, she's blending in. Worth trying though.

I really like the design. Number one is my favorite. The slight opacity on the type makes it look much more professional.

I would adjust the layout of Frock & Roll in the first concept. I couldn't tell if it was FP Rock & Roll Resents, or Frock & Proll. But I really like the way you used the ampersand in the first concepts compared to the second.

Really nice design, but I think the greyscales are little to dull for the nice design.

what about this:

Hi Surya,

I think this invitation looks fun.

I think the hair color brought out as you have it is a bit too much. Have you considered highlighting subtley other items? Such as maybe her pearls, lips like Marylin, just a few curled highlights (possibly in party colors) in her hair? Or adding a party item and highlighting only that with color, a drawn in princess crown on her hair?

Why not just put the ampersand in front of roll normaly and let the color draw to her with whatever you select to highlight. Right now the color only draws to the undecided placement of an ampersand. If anything why not add color to the crown in the thing you have going on above the word "frock"?

I think the text color of the second one down would look great with the background as you have it in the first one.

Nice one i would like be there :). This invite some mix with 1890y and 1950+ but can be. Greetz for her next 18 ;)

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Really neat. Looks like an album cover.