Alan Horne

itsfilmtastic.co.uk - Film Blog design V3

By Alan Horne

   on Feb 09, 2010
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  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

    3658

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    logos

    Posted on Feb 09, 2010 at 2:27 PM

    I like it, so much better than the last one I think. Have you tried making the twitter and facebook logos for example blue? To add some color and to highlight them.

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Feb 10, 2010 at 4:59 AM

      I could try that, as the design does need another colour from red.

  • Toby Pestridge

    Toby Pestridge

    Rank: 2 Titan

    417

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Accent colour

    Posted on Feb 09, 2010 at 5:58 PM

    Good clean, crisp layout.

    I'd like to see an accent colour, to add some variation to the dominant red, and to highlight areas of importance.

    Try a rich green, sage or teal.

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Feb 10, 2010 at 4:58 AM

      Yeah i think the design does need another colour, its just trying to find the right one that works.

  • Iom Ka

    Iom Ka

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    60

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    salmon buttons, background, icons, white border...

    Posted on Feb 09, 2010 at 7:15 PM

    love it !

    about, contacts and read more buttons seem too much 'salmon' to me though.

    i would darken, desaturate and blur (why not a defocus effect ?) a little bit the background, and put twitter and facebook icons with their original colors.

    Not a huge fan of the thin white border too.

    Clean layout, good use of red, good work !

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Lookin' good

    Posted on Feb 10, 2010 at 2:43 PM

    I like where you are taking this. Here are a few ideas:

    1. Work on your logo. I would just use "Filmtastic" with the web address below it.
    2. Use a more abstract image for the background
    3. Lose the ticket in the right hand corner for something less literal
    4. Extend the sidebar all the way to the bottom
    5. Give your buttons more padding and shrink the text in them

    Great work here so far, keep it up!

  • Peter Georgiev

    Peter Georgiev

    Rank: 4 Master

    635

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    ;p

    Posted on Feb 10, 2010 at 6:29 PM

    Too much red for me but I admit this concept is better. I think "follow me" should be aligned with the layout below.