Victor

“Escúchanos Madrecita”

By Victor

   on Feb 09, 2010
15 Reviews11 Votes1 Favorite459 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Michelle Rauh

    Michelle Rauh

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    maybe the floral background

    Posted on Feb 10, 2010 at 9:56 PM

    This reminds me of some Iranian poster art I've seen. I don't mind not seeing the pray, I get it. The only thing i would suggest is to just try out some different compositions. Less center, big, to the right, to the left color text. Just for kicks. The image is engaging Im just curious to how how it can be pushed around on the page. I wish i had this so i could play with it on my computer. Its awesome doing that with text, its a pain. It fits your purpose very nicely.

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:47 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! The Floral background refers the robe Lady of Guadalupe ;)

  • Jon Spooner

    Jon Spooner

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    the background

    Posted on Feb 12, 2010 at 12:11 PM

    this is such a cool idea and well executed. I would be happier if there was a bit more distinction between the prayer type so you can see that they are seperate prayers.

    In all honesty this would ROCK as an flash design where you would first see the prayers written out and then see it grow and grow into the Lady of Guadalupe.

    Why the scripty scrolly background? it seems a bit out of place with the contemporary design in the foreground.

    From the icon on the review page I was instantly interested so this bodes well for it as an attention grabbing image! great work!

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:54 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! The Floral background refers the robe Lady of Guadalupe. Actually I have been worked a presentation of this design, and your idea is awesome ;)

  • Chakib Tsouli

    Chakib Tsouli

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    Typo

    Posted on Feb 14, 2010 at 5:49 AM

    Great work !!! i like it ! I think the text under the artwork is a Quotation right ? if so, maybe it'll be better if you use quotes ( " " ). Otherwise , great work !!! i love it !!!

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:55 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! And the observation about the quotes ;)

  • Sandesh k

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    I like it

    Posted on Feb 15, 2010 at 7:41 AM

    Loved the text renedred in water color like effect

    • Kirill Kedrinski
      Kirill Kedrinski commented:
      Posted: on Feb 15, 2010 at 9:54 AM

      Its good but i think maybe it should be easier. Now it keeps me looking and thinking about it and i will not remember this tomorrow. It is very difficult to understand and remember this logo

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:59 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! The concept is a proposal for a virtual exhibition like a poster, that is the reason it have a lot of detail with typography. I really apreciate yours feedbacks ;)

  • Tim Mannino

    Tim Mannino

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    Love it!

    Posted on Feb 15, 2010 at 10:27 AM

    Very beautiful representation.. I know people have done this kind of thing many times over but I still love seeing images created from text. Wonderful. Good job!

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:59 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)

  • Vinicius Chaves De Andrade

    Vinicius Chaves De Andrade

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    Nothing

    Posted on Feb 16, 2010 at 10:22 AM

    That's an amazing piece of art that tell us everything it should and more.

    You've done a great job!

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:59 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)

  • Jennifer O'Toole

    Jennifer O'Toole

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    perhaps the text at the bottom

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 9:37 AM

    well, first of all i think this is a great design. it almost looks like a painting. i like the beautiful simplicity of it all and the subtle background seems to add a nice touch.

    i think the text at the bottom leaves something to be desired. maybe change up the size of the quote to be larger? or perhaps a different font for one?

    overall though great design!

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:48 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)

  • Ricardo Betanzos Betanzos

    Ricardo Betanzos Betanzos

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    Hola!, la idea me parece muy buena y creo que va muy bien en el contexto de una exhibición. Quizá podrías acentuar aún más el concepto mexicano con el uso del color, pero igual así se ve muy bien. Felicidades!

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:49 PM

      Gracias por el comentario!! ;)

  • Joel Glovier

    Joel Glovier

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    maybe the words to extend further

    Posted on Feb 11, 2010 at 12:21 PM

    REALLY like what you have created. Very nicely done. The colors and very nice, and the image of the St. lady is very good.

    I would maybe make the words extend out further, but your concept is great and you've executed it well as is.

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:49 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)

  • Miro

    Miro

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    I like it

    Posted on Feb 09, 2010 at 1:39 PM

    I think this is more art than a poster, so it is very hard to say why I like it. But I do, it has an idea, is simple and nice!

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:38 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    I would like to see

    Posted on Feb 09, 2010 at 1:47 PM

    the prayers stand out a bit more, so that you can see what it is that is making her be there...

    I like it as well it's very original, I would see this more as a print / artwork than a poster, so it really does fit into the virtual art gallery space quite well.

    Great Job!!

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:39 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)

  • Dan Allen Pantinople

    Dan Allen Pantinople

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    wow!

    Posted on Feb 09, 2010 at 8:21 PM

    Holy dear! its Mama Mary..and nicely done! very unique! Good job!

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:39 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)

  • Derrick Dedmon

    Derrick Dedmon

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    I like the design very much.

    Posted on Feb 09, 2010 at 9:47 PM

    I like the colors and the artistically placed Mary in the image.

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:39 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Looks great

    Posted on Feb 10, 2010 at 2:39 PM

    My only suggesting here is to somehow bring the colors out to the rest of the page. Right now it feels a bit unbalanced with the only color being in the center. Try adding some bright colors to the edges of the page. If you do it right, you will still maintain the focal point in the middle that you are going for.

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:40 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)

  • Harish Chouhan

    Harish Chouhan

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    Great work

    Posted on Feb 10, 2010 at 4:14 PM

    Its awesome.

    • Victor
      Victor commented:
      Posted: on Feb 22, 2010 at 3:40 PM

      Thanks for the feedback!! ;)