This reminds me of some Iranian poster art I've seen. I don't mind not seeing the pray, I get it. The only thing i would suggest is to just try out some different compositions. Less center, big, to the right, to the left color text. Just for kicks. The image is engaging Im just curious to how how it can be pushed around on the page. I wish i had this so i could play with it on my computer. Its awesome doing that with text, its a pain. It fits your purpose very nicely.
this is such a cool idea and well executed. I would be happier if there was a bit more distinction between the prayer type so you can see that they are seperate prayers.
In all honesty this would ROCK as an flash design where you would first see the prayers written out and then see it grow and grow into the Lady of Guadalupe.
Why the scripty scrolly background? it seems a bit out of place with the contemporary design in the foreground.
From the icon on the review page I was instantly interested so this bodes well for it as an attention grabbing image! great work!
Thanks for the feedback!! The Floral background refers the robe Lady of Guadalupe. Actually I have been worked a presentation of this design, and your idea is awesome ;)
Great work !!! i like it ! I think the text under the artwork is a Quotation right ? if so, maybe it'll be better if you use quotes ( " " ). Otherwise , great work !!! i love it !!!
Loved the text renedred in water color like effect
Its good but i think maybe it should be easier. Now it keeps me looking and thinking about it and i will not remember this tomorrow. It is very difficult to understand and remember this logo
Thanks for the feedback!! The concept is a proposal for a virtual exhibition like a poster, that is the reason it have a lot of detail with typography. I really apreciate yours feedbacks ;)
Very beautiful representation.. I know people have done this kind of thing many times over but I still love seeing images created from text. Wonderful. Good job!
That's an amazing piece of art that tell us everything it should and more.
You've done a great job!
well, first of all i think this is a great design. it almost looks like a painting. i like the beautiful simplicity of it all and the subtle background seems to add a nice touch.
i think the text at the bottom leaves something to be desired. maybe change up the size of the quote to be larger? or perhaps a different font for one?
overall though great design!
Hola!, la idea me parece muy buena y creo que va muy bien en el contexto de una exhibición. Quizá podrías acentuar aún más el concepto mexicano con el uso del color, pero igual así se ve muy bien. Felicidades!
REALLY like what you have created. Very nicely done. The colors and very nice, and the image of the St. lady is very good.
I would maybe make the words extend out further, but your concept is great and you've executed it well as is.
I think this is more art than a poster, so it is very hard to say why I like it. But I do, it has an idea, is simple and nice!
the prayers stand out a bit more, so that you can see what it is that is making her be there...
I like it as well it's very original, I would see this more as a print / artwork than a poster, so it really does fit into the virtual art gallery space quite well.
Great Job!!
Holy dear! its Mama Mary..and nicely done! very unique! Good job!
I like the colors and the artistically placed Mary in the image.
My only suggesting here is to somehow bring the colors out to the rest of the page. Right now it feels a bit unbalanced with the only color being in the center. Try adding some bright colors to the edges of the page. If you do it right, you will still maintain the focal point in the middle that you are going for.
Its awesome.
Thanks for the feedback!! The Floral background refers the robe Lady of Guadalupe ;)