Alan Horne

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By Alan Horne

   on Feb 08, 2010
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  • Mester Catalin

    Mester Catalin

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    to boxy

    Posted on Feb 08, 2010 at 4:31 AM

    Hey,

    this is a great start I like the color scheme and navigation very much.

    What I would work on is the box design, text headings and here button. Not commenting on the footer cause it seems like it's not finished but same changes apply there also.

    Looking forward to see where this is going.

    Regards, MEster

    • Alan Horne
      Alan Horne commented:
      Posted: on Feb 08, 2010 at 4:34 AM

      Yeah im thinking of making the 'here' buttons to white, nit sure on the grey colour for them.

    • Mester Catalin
      Mester Catalin commented:
      Posted: on Feb 08, 2010 at 4:40 AM

      Keep in mind that they are key points to site usability and must give them special attention,just spend like 30min more on the design and will pay off.

      Regards, MEster

    • pranav adsule
      pranav adsule commented:
      Posted: on Feb 08, 2010 at 5:04 AM

      Remove header

  • Alex Young

    Alex Young

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    Buttons

    Posted on Feb 08, 2010 at 1:48 PM

    The three blue boxes at the bottom, I would change it from saying "here" to "more". I'm liking the background. Maybe changing the footer color would be a bit better. I would also tone down the header a bit :)

    Overall pretty cool!

  • Peter Georgiev

    Peter Georgiev

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    ;p

    Posted on Feb 08, 2010 at 2:17 PM

    I don't think this is your background. You could change the arrow menu style in the slideshow. It's too big.

  • valmir jr

    valmir jr

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    The header/logo

    Posted on Feb 08, 2010 at 4:36 PM

    I think the logo and the header isn't fitting the corporate style of the website.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Good work

    Posted on Feb 10, 2010 at 1:58 PM

    This is good progress but a few things need to be addressed:

    1. Make the background 100% black, so that it blends in with the header image and you don't have a line. I also like the idea of the navigation bar blending in with the background.
    2. On your image selection, shorten the size of the arrows. Decrease the amount of spacing on the buttons. Align your text left, not centered
    3. Add some more padding into the content area. Everything feels very tight and squeezed.
    4. Keep working on your footer, not sure it's working for me yet.

    Good progress overall here!

  • Xdynx Xdynx

    Xdynx Xdynx

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    Remove header

    Posted on Feb 08, 2010 at 3:28 AM

    Remove header - header is not suitable to design, logo is not suitable to design