Concept Reviews
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this is nice and clean, but it needs some sort of activity to it, mabe some planes or a hot air balloon...
maybe less blue and white, add a distiguishable footer...
Good luck!
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Not sure whether the volume of text is exactly what you're planning for the home page or not, however if it is, I would recommend you read Steve Krug's "Don't Make Me Think".
Take a look at any website from 37signals (basecamp) for example, and see how they attract people into their site.
People love to scan and hate to read.
If you do want to use that much text, consider shortening the paragraph length.
Just a thought :)
p.s. love the molecular diagram. For me it represents connectivity quite well.
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Digital commented:Hi thanks for feedback. regarding texts, it is not defined yet which to come..for now just placed a dummy texts.
special thanks for comments on the diagram :-)
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Nice and clean but the text is difficult to read.
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As said earlier, body text is a little voluminous and in my opinion may be a little small and perhaps even a little too light. Larger text with key points, possibly a little darker on the bright white background. Overall I like it!
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Digital commented:
thanks,
yes you are right, as it is not clear which texts will go into home..hence we just placed a dummy texts. Hopefully when we get the actual texts, then we could arrange as you suggested.
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nice, cool and clean design! love it..^_^
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not understand fonts are too small, too light page
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Digital commented:
hi thanks for commenting. yes we understand the overall ambiance is lighter, it kept intentionally. but for the texts size, we will look into.
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The design is very nice, i like it alot.
But i would reccommend working on your content more, some images and some more striking text is needed to make it work.
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I want to say it is something like a hot air balloon or some sort of airship. I can't quite put my finger on it :)
Im really liking how simple it is, very clean!
Great job!
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The body text is too long, some improvement could be done about that.
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Digital commented:
hi texts are currently as place holder only.. we will work further after getting the actual contents.
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I believe you should think what your main strengths are and highlight them in some way on the front page. A couple of drawings or pictures would say so much... Otherwise very fresh and nice style!
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I like where you are going here. The illustrations of the clouds are great. I would make the molecule image and the paragraph of text fit a little better. Also, cut the amount of text and increase the line height. This should all feel very airy. Good work here so far, keep it up.
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The cloud background work really well, but it takes up a lot of focus. Also I don't get what this company does. Cloud computing is a broad area and the design does not communicate what they are selling.
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Digital commented:
Hi, thanks for talking time & reviewing this work. regarding the contents etc.. we are also waiting to have the same. so that. we hope can fill the gaps which you have pointed pretty well. Thank again
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excellet design! just work on the content display if you like and introduce contrast using typography or black text
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thank you for taking time to provide your views. regarding the activity.. probably some sort of rotating texts may add, as you suggested balloons etc may not... as per the scope/client likings.
But we would like to little more as you suggested "maybe less blue and white, add a distiguishable footer..." .. honestly we are stuck at this moment... so here we are :-).. please do suggest.