Samuel Mateo, Jr.

Website for Easy Budgeting

By Samuel Mateo, Jr.

   on Feb 04, 2010
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  • Jason Houston

    Jason Houston

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    Add flash video?

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 7:08 PM

    If you have the resources maybe add a flash video with screenshots and reasons why to sign-up for the site. Smooth design good logo. The 'I Can Swing it' seems a little simple and maybe could be stronger. This site is good in a time where money can be tight and people need to smarten up with budgeting.

    • Samuel Mateo, Jr.
      Posted: on Feb 04, 2010 at 7:54 PM

      HI Jason, thanks for the feedback. If you look back to the original version of this site you will see that it originally had a jquery slider/fader, with exactly what you suggested. In this version we decided to take it out just to see how it would look. We might eventually put it back in, that won't be an issue. Flash is not really necessary for this site.

      The logo does need on the typography end I just can't figure something better. Looking for ideas on that as well.

  • Peter Georgiev

    Peter Georgiev

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    hmm

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 8:12 PM

    The gray it's not your background and menu color. The meaning of gray in web is coolness, depression. I think your objective is on the contrary.

    Bad glow in the diagram. There is no logic for the different sizes of the two buttons. It's disturbing. You have mistaken the colors too. The red is the stronger color who grabs people's attention. So "Sign Up Today" must be in red.

    "Can I swing it is for YOU" - green it's not the color. You should change it or change the color of the gradient behind it.

    You have big problems with typography and alignment. Bad text contrast. I recommend you to visit http://www.thegridsystem.org/ | http://960.gs/ and http://articles.sitepoint.com/article/principles-beautiful-web-design

    There is detailed explanation about this principles of web design.

    • Samuel Mateo, Jr.
      Posted: on Feb 04, 2010 at 8:27 PM

      Hi Peter, Thanks for the feedback.

      If not gray then what colors do you suggest?

      I agree with you on the buttons sizes and the colors. My partner did not want to listen to reason. I will pass on your feedback to see if he changes his mind.

      I was going back and forth on the green on that "Can I Swing IT is for YOU!" text. I'll try something else.

      I am using the 960 grid system, all boxes are aligned to the grid. I agree the text is off but I was putting together this comp very hurriedly. I will fix the text alignment in the next version

    • Peter Georgiev
      Peter Georgiev commented:
      Posted: on Feb 05, 2010 at 6:19 AM

      The third concept is much better. There is smooth logical transition between the background and the header. I see you have changed the buttons and "Can i swing it..". Diagram glow is better. The social network icons should be aligned with the heading "Contact with us".

      Look at the concepts again and try to see which concept is better and why. It's important for you to understand the difference. In future you will make less mistakes.

  • Surya Osborne

    Surya Osborne

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    There are a lot of point on the right hand side of the main call to action box. You could slim them down so they are easier to scan, and catchier.

    Also you colour palette could do with some revision like Peter said.

    Have you ever checked out; http://kuler.adobe.com/#themes/rating?time=30 for colour palette ideas?

    The images in the 3rd and 4th rows need a bit of tlc so they don't look like they have been left there by mistake.

    Overall though you have done a great job and the site is similar in function to this cluttered UK site.

    http://www.moneysavingexpert.com/

    God luck with the revisions.

  • Jez Liberty

    Jez Liberty

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    I'd go for number 2

    Posted on Feb 05, 2010 at 6:32 AM

    I think home page/landing page should be simplified whenever possible so I would definitely go for option 2 or 3. Option 2 offers more contrast, so I'd go for that one.

    Not sure what your main objective is in terms of following but I would re-order the footer: blog first, connect icon second and twitter third.

    I think Sign Up today in red and Learn more in green (darker than on 3rd design though) is more striking and effective.

    • Samuel Mateo, Jr.
      Posted: on Feb 05, 2010 at 4:38 PM

      Thanks for the feedback Jez, we took your thoughts and believe we've come up with a better version. Though all the blue seems to be overkill now that I look at it again. See for yourself.

  • Harish Chouhan

    Harish Chouhan

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    Lot Better than earlier

    Posted on Feb 05, 2010 at 10:03 AM

    You did use the last feedback.

    The new layout is lot better. IN the first design I liked the clear top header. However the grey in the background is making the site look heavy. Get rid of it keep it plain white, it would look good.

    Stick to this current content position as its nice. Work on this:

    1. The content seems to have too many boxes. Remove them, keep it plain. Add a rectangle border for the images in that section, so it feels consistent. And also try to work on those images, so they have same colour intensity.

    2. The footer is too dark. Get rid of its background, keep it plain.

    3. In the section below menu, below the "signup" button, there is a grey bar, which feels unnatural there. Keep it plain, and give some contrast to its background to make that entire thing pop out from the design. This will help improve this section, and keeping other things simpler will balance the layout.

    • Samuel Mateo, Jr.
      Posted: on Feb 05, 2010 at 4:39 PM

      Thanks for the feedback Harish. We changed the footer color take a look at the new version.

    • Harish Chouhan
      Harish Chouhan commented:
      Posted: on Feb 05, 2010 at 4:45 PM

      Thats' nice Samuel. Its lot better. But the background colour is still not working. Try with a white background or a very light shade of grey which is close to white.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    better

    Posted on Feb 05, 2010 at 11:11 AM

    Your moving in the right direction here. Just concentrate on make this simpler, cleaner and less segmented. The segmentation on this site is really breaking things up. Try to make it flow better.

  • Jeff Lewis

    Jeff Lewis

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    I like the coins in the logo

    Posted on Feb 05, 2010 at 12:56 PM

    i think you've got a clear home page

    • Samuel Mateo, Jr.
      Posted: on Feb 05, 2010 at 4:40 PM

      Thanks for the feedback Jeff, the coins are indeed going back into the logo. Just have to do some tweaking. I have uploaded a new version of the page. Take a look.