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Concept Description
- Website:
- www.webtions.com
- Objective:
- Clean, Simple Logo
- Target Market:
- 18 to 50
- Categories:
- logo design identity
This is a 3rd attempt on this logo.
I earlier had placed a hand pointer but I knew it was overused. I wanted a simple concept. I wanted a logo that I could keep on working on over the next couple of months to improve it.
I finally decided to go with a "DOT". Since the business deals with only web solutions like domain & hosting, I felt this works, is simple, can the basic idea can be improved over the years.
I am attaching 2 fonts, I mostly like the 2nd one, due to its clarity in all sizes. Would appreciate if you guys tell me which font you would like.
Previous Versions
Version 1
Concept Reviews
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i like the first font better because it gives more strength than the second one but i think you dont need that "circle" and the "broken square" (i really dont know what that is called) instead, maybe you could add up some colors a bit in the typo..i dont know...but the simpler the better..^_^
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Maybe some blue in the title and possibly give it some shading to bring it off the page.
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I like the first one more than the second one. I think the first one offers a nice variation and contrast to the type at the bottom. The top one when normal and reduced, create a nice block mark and I'm feeling that more than the second one. See how it has nice contrast when normal, but kind of looses its weight when you reduce it?
I'm looking at the tagline and I'm wondering if it's going to be hard to read when it's reduced smaller. I'd maybe try to open up the kerning maybe a few point sizes because it seems kinda tight right now. The bottom one's kerning probably could use to be tighter if you decide to use that one.
I was going to comment on the circles and lines. I was going to say they're rather distracting, but I can see you're not going to implement them in your final treatment.
Overall great progress, looking forward to your final one! :)
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Harish Chouhan commented:Thanks Khoa,
I will go with the 1st one. Will work on the kerning as you said. Since I would have to buy that font, I used the snapshot from font site to get feedback before buying it.
Will also work on the slogan size.
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I like the first one best. The letters fit better together as a whole. One thing I would change is the circle and lines, I think they are getting lost in all the black. You could have the same problem with the slogan as well.
Hope this helps!
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Harish Chouhan commented:
Thanks Naomi. The lines and circles are not part of the logo just added them as had time to spare. The logo only consists of the text and the large dot at the end.
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Thanks Allen. Do not consider the broken square/circles. They are not part of the logo design. they are just added there because I had time on my hands..
Once I am final with the font, would then work on the colours.