Tyler Cooper

Business Card

By Tyler Cooper

   on Feb 03, 2010
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  • Al Calderon

    Al Calderon

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    Great start

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 1:29 PM

    Excellent choice of font and colors.

    Not a huge fan of the graph, especially on the front. If you are going to use a gradient, I recommend adjusting the backside of the card.

  • Simon Willans

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    Very dated

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 3:02 PM

    This design looks very dated. I think this is down to the background colour. Obvious grey gradients with strong bold colours do not mix well in my books.

    As for the text, I'd say the email address is too close to the right-hand circle. Personally, on the right-hand side, I'd swap the phone number and position around, so it somewhat reflects the opposite site.

  • Aymeric Gaurat-Apelli

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    I would leave the background white.

    Posted on Feb 05, 2010 at 5:31 AM

    I am not a big fan of the font you use for the information text. Having a weird font doesn't really add any value. Keep the font simple.

    Also I would highlight more the employee details, rather than the company details.

  • Joseph Dougherty

    Joseph Dougherty

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    Looks good!

    Posted on Feb 07, 2010 at 10:49 PM

    Color choices work well, and I like the fade. I think the line looks good as it is, but a little depth couldn't hurt.

  • Michal Saleh

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    I would change the graph

    Posted on Feb 08, 2010 at 4:42 PM

    I like the ide in general, the logo is good, font colors are good too, but I would change the background to something lighter (light grey, white maybe) as it makes a boring impression.

    The graph is good start, but I would change it so that it ends high on the first page. Currently the first page ends with low graph and that makes an impression of revenue going down. After turning back to the other side customers would likely get the idea but the first impression would stay subconsiously.

    You can try experimenting with vertical bar chart which is usually used to picture profit growth.

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    Line

    Posted on Feb 03, 2010 at 4:39 PM

    Hey Tyler

    I quite like where this is going, I like the font, very cool and colours work well.

    The only real critique I have is that the graph line looks flat and yet it has a shadow, looks kind of odd, I would give the line some depth!

    Good Luck!

  • Benoit Sanson

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    Too much grey

    Posted on Feb 03, 2010 at 5:25 PM

    I think this project will better work with a lighter grey, near white.

  • Sylvia Brummer

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    I like the line, bgut if its meant to be a rise in profitability, I would change the direction of the last part of it on the front of the card to go up as well.

  • Andy Blount

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    Needs a few tweaks

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 6:56 AM

    The background looks dated to me - I think a white one or a flat light grey one would work better.

    The spacing seems a little off in the whitespace between the bottom of the logo and the top of the red card text (the bit with the url and employee name). Move the card text away from the red line a bit more.

    On the back, centre aligning the 'facilities simplified' but might look better so that it matches the centre alignment of the logo on the front.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Solid start

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 8:10 AM

    Good work here, this is a solid start. I like the logo, the gray background and the general colors you are using. However I am not sure about the general layout. The line graph is a good idea but i'm not sure most people will understand what you are trying to say through it. Maybe try a more subtle approach with the graph. I think the part that bothers me is that it's bold and red and a defined element. Maybe if you make it more of a background element? Also, the layout of the wording on the card feels a bit strange. I would center "facilities simplified" and I would think about only displaying the employee information instead of having them separated. Hope that all makes sense, let me know if not.

  • Harish Chouhan

    Harish Chouhan

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    The Red Graphs needs to be more subtle.

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 10:38 AM

    Everything looks good, except the grey background.

    The graph can also look more better if you it in a more subtle way.