Jose Rauda

Convention/Banquet Brochure

By Jose Rauda

   on Feb 03, 2010
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Concept Reviews

  • Eric Venuto

    Eric Venuto

    Rank: 2 Titan

    354

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    AIR is all that is light blue, add elsewhere?

    Posted on Feb 03, 2010 at 6:50 PM

    I LOVE the simplicity of this design. Could you make the Script font a little darker and maybe unite with "Vista" collection? Also, could you use the "AIR" skyblue color elsewhere for balance? I think even as a large bullet somewhere it would be nice.

    • Jose Rauda
      Jose Rauda commented:
      Posted: on Feb 03, 2010 at 9:23 PM

      Thanks for your comments. I will implement the blue somehow! Thanks again!

  • Francisc Aknai

    Francisc Aknai

    Rank: 5 Advanced

    127

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 5
    1 Vote
    love it

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 7:22 AM

    really classy and clean, love the fonts and the colors chosen, a really nice visual impact.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Very elegant

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 8:00 AM

    I think you hit a sweet spot on this design. Very elegant, simple and clean. I really like it and would change very little if anything. A+ job on this piece, well done!

  • Harish Chouhan

    Harish Chouhan

    Rank: 5 Advanced

    1091

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    Great Work

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 10:39 AM

    Nicely done, nothing over done and just classy. Perfect!

  • Khoa Nguyen

    Khoa Nguyen

    Rank: 2 Titan

    146

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Nice

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 7:01 PM

    Great looking brochure! I think it works and you've done a great job on the visual hierarchy.

    One thing I'd consider is changing or muting the yellow a bit? I feel like its really strong when I enlarged the piece. Maybe bring it down to a softer yellow because that shade of yellow doesn't say elegant to me. But great job with everything else! :)

    • Jose Rauda
      Jose Rauda commented:
      Posted: on Feb 04, 2010 at 10:24 PM

      I will try that! Thanks for the comment!

  • Ari Suardiyanti

    Ari Suardiyanti

    Rank: 3 Superior

    559

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Fits very well :)

    Posted on Feb 05, 2010 at 11:38 AM

    Overall I love this, simple, elegant and really fits for hotel managers as your target :) But as Eric Venuto mentioned, that blue color in "AIR" draw attention to it more that the rest of the design, but I don't think it matters much since it's a folded brochure :) good work.

    • Jose Rauda
      Jose Rauda commented:
      Posted: on Feb 05, 2010 at 11:49 PM

      Thank you for your comments! I really appreciate it!

  • Ludovico Colafelice

    Ludovico Colafelice

    Rank: 3 Superior

    268

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    Draft

    Posted on Oct 18, 2010 at 5:12 AM

    Bello, non riesco a trovare difetti...