Personal Logo

Get rid of the yellow dot. Put the leaves above the upper left corner of the "M". Put the tagline beneath the name and try it without ".com". I think it could work. I attached what I think, just redefine the leaves a bit.

I like where you are going with this but think there are too many colors going on. Try to simplify your palette. I like the colors of the leaves, except for the yellow dot. I would keep the text the same color and allow the leaves to really pop off the design. Also, bring the tagline down below your name. Great start, just keep working through the details.

You have far too many colours - you should cut it down to 2, maybe 3.

I'd also remove the orange dot in the J, and make the "C" in com lower case.

Did a quick PS mockup...

Gurmesh

You are using way too many colors.

Maybe you don't need the yellow dot at all. Have you tried putting the leaves on the top left of the J ?

Also, why did you choose to have C in uppercase in Com? It is a noisy detail.

it's pretty interesting, but too crowded, personally i would get rid of ".com" .

i do like the leaves on the left, remove the dot from and maybe drag the leaves lower so they would start from the " J ", and also move the tagline "let you business grow" under "miller".

there is potential :)

I like the logo but there's too much going on. But pretty much what Nate had to say. The potential is there! Good job.

overall I like it, I think it might be a bit too busy though...

maybe try a more organic font, and instead of the berry and leaves have jame miller.com with roots and the tagline under the roots...

Good Luck!

My eye went right to the red ".com" and red leaf first (which probably aren't your focal points), so I'm inclined to agree with most everyone else: reduce the number of colors, remove the ".com," and play around with the placement of the leaves and tagline.

I'm ok with the different leaves colors, the typo and the gradients.

But i'd get rid of the ".com" (pointless), and the yellow dot (use the J instead to simulate a branch for example). About the tag line, try to eliminate this green parasite color (choose either the blue or the black color, used in your logo) ... and throw the ending dot away (after "grow"). :)

No point stating the obvious, others have covered that enough.

I think when you take the dot out it leaves a big hole!

One thing I think it needs is the strap line moving underneath and making bigger as its pretty small even at this size. Same with the .com, why so small, double it. I say this because the main thing you see is the leaves, so you think florist, until you read your tiny text about business, if you had this bigger, people will connect with it quicker.

I would suggest also to take away the ".com", because you should brand youself more than your website.

Nice Design, However the layout M.H. suggested looks lot better.