Zak Normandin

Little Duck Organics - Organic Snacks For Infants And Toddlers

By Zak Normandin

   on Jul 14, 2009
5 Reviews2 Votes0 Favorites593 Views

Concept Reviews

  • craig watkins

    craig watkins

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    whats the grass for?

    Posted on Jul 14, 2009 at 10:53 AM

    Personally I want to see the product. I understand babies are cute, but the main image actually features a bunch of grass not the baby.

    If you just dropped the main image and let the rest float up i think you'd have a stronger message. If you really want that image, it would be great if you could bring the baby into the center or at least into the main content area. I'd use the stamp tool to make the cropping work if I had to.

    I do think you've made some good choices about the general feel of the site, but if I was the client, I'd wonder why the grass is more important than my product.

  • Stubbsy Pepsuber

    Stubbsy Pepsuber

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    38

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
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    Lose the banner

    Posted on Jul 14, 2009 at 11:28 AM

    I like the design, but I think you can get rid of the baby at top. The colors will pull you in, and the babies on the side of the page. Also, reduce the size of the three products in the middle of the page.

  • Joel Acevedo

    Joel Acevedo

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    Color vombo

    Posted on Jul 24, 2009 at 9:15 AM

    Use a more vivid color combo. Use better graphics. Get rid of the left column.

  • Aubrey Emerson

    Aubrey Emerson

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 4
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    Less white space

    Posted on Aug 05, 2009 at 11:56 AM

    I agree that the top banner may not be needed...but even as it is, it seems like there's a bit much white space. This is a baby/mom product...lots of vibrant colors (with a natural tint here, maybe) speak to your audience. White space makes it look tamer, more professional...less fun/cute. Can you find a way to make it more "fun" with color/material, but not clutter the page too much?

  • Drew Horine

    Drew Horine

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    3

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
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    Put the message up top.

    Posted on Aug 11, 2009 at 10:16 AM

    Babies are cute, but grass is not. When I look at this site, I don't know what the point is. Is it a photography site? Is it my baby's pictures? What?

    Let's move the tag line (favorite snack) to the top and put a baby on white or some happy color enjoying the snack with the product packaging prominently displayed.

    Everything on the white background from the product pictures down looks good.