Rajavel Ramasamy

The ORGz

By Rajavel Ramasamy

   on Feb 01, 2010
12 Reviews2 Votes1 Favorite331 Views

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  • Ben Rama

    Ben Rama

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    needs work

    Posted on Feb 01, 2010 at 11:56 AM

    there are too many colours - you only need to use 2

    if you pu the the next to teh orgz it would be web 2.0 ish

    just needs a little work

  • Ionut Resetar

    Ionut Resetar

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    The leaves need some work

    Posted on Feb 01, 2010 at 4:07 PM

    The first think I see is the leaves are not really worked, are just 3 color shapes. Make them more like leaves but not to much you don't need to get to realistic on this, I just feel they are not worked.

  • Bryan Mathews

    Bryan Mathews

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    nice but doesnt say "food"

    Posted on Feb 01, 2010 at 4:52 PM

    it doesnt give me any clue on what type of business you are in

  • Fuckyou Fuckyou

    Fuckyou Fuckyou

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    Great start

    Posted on Feb 01, 2010 at 10:00 PM

    I like the orange and the greens. Thy always say "fresh and trendy" Isn't that a great way to conceptual "organic" products? ;)

    I'm not a fan of the fonts, however. The blue doesn't do it for me and seem to conflict with the colour palette, which itself needs a little refinement.

    It's a good start, but needs a lot of polish to really "pop."

  • Tiffany Gagnon

    Tiffany Gagnon

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    Good start

    Posted on Feb 02, 2010 at 9:01 AM

    I think this is a good start. I think you definitly need to work on the relationship between the two words. I'd also like to see some more interaction with the leaves? Maybe give them some kind line treatement? Or illustrative flair?

    Keep it up!

  • Wouter De Loose

    Wouter De Loose

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    need some work

    Posted on Feb 02, 2010 at 11:08 AM

    I like the overall design, but i think it need some more adjustments.

    The "the" is just sitting there, try to integrate it more with the rest of the logo

    But a good start.

  • Emmanuel Marot

    Emmanuel Marot

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    Improve alignment

    Posted on Feb 02, 2010 at 1:51 PM

    Between the 2 fonts, the smaller z, the 3 leaves each with a different color, I think the eye has not much to 'rest' upon. You should try to better align 'the', 'z' and the lines with the 'ORG'

  • Khoa Nguyen

    Khoa Nguyen

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    The Font for ORGZ

    Posted on Feb 04, 2010 at 4:57 PM

    I'm agreeing with a lot of the reviews that most people have left. I think that the color harmony isn't quite there yet.

    Something I'm noticing and maybe something you'd like to try is to change the font of ORGZ. I feel like it the squareness of the font doesn't feel organic quite yet. It looks kinda stiff, so maybe you wanna try like a serif or maybe something that's a little looser.

    The leaf mark is coming together, but I'd try to work out the placement and colors a little bit more. Hope this helps!

    Good job, you've got a good start going!

  • Red Beard

    Red Beard

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    Great Choice of Colors

    Posted on Feb 07, 2010 at 2:50 AM

    I agree with Nate Hamilton. The colors are perfect but the font seems very heavy.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Good direction

    Posted on Feb 01, 2010 at 8:38 AM

    This is a good direction but needs some work. I don't think the fonts are working together with the design. I think you want a very light feeling with the organic food theme. I would use lighter fonts and colors to create a very natural logo. I also don't like how the leaves are situated on the logo.

  • Harish Chouhan

    Harish Chouhan

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    The text "the"

    Posted on Feb 01, 2010 at 9:06 AM

    Nice start. Am waiting to see how you would work upon this to enhance it even further, but for now I feel,

    The text "the" does not look well placed.

    The idea is nice and you have a good base, but would live to see what you can do with the 3 shapes to make them look even better.

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

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    Colours

    Posted on Feb 01, 2010 at 9:51 AM

    I like the design, it really works for the logo and the market, but the colours don't work for me.

    I would drop the blue from it.