Article Page Design

The page has a lot of text. In order to increase readability, try breaking up the paragraphs a little more by either adding a bit more space between them or adding a few pictures. People are drawn in by snippets of text - more negative space helps achieve this.

Also, the sub-title is a little hard to read because of the bold background; it needs a little more polish to convey the message.

Like the other reviewers have said, the text spacing needs work. I'm supposed to want to read the text not ignore it.

I won't waffle on, just read the reviews above me and you have all the advice you need.

I do like the initial idea it's just the execution needs some work.

Good luck, I look forward to seeing the next version.

This is a pretty cool and creative design. Here are a few of my thoughts though:

1. Make your logo stand out more. Right now it is fading in with the rest of the design.
2. Thing about including your heading on the white background square.
3. Center the content in the center of the page more (horizontally).
4. Use a lighter font for your content.

Great start, just a few edits.

I like the colors and great job. Maybe change the gray and black dot colors.

The white lines just not working.

As its related to creativity, you might want to try some different font for the heading.

Try some other fonts on the title, this one is very static. And if it says "creative color", why is it black? ;) The small subtitle is hard to read, maybe use some background? I would make the article background a little bit transparent, and change the colours of article titles. Again, the font doesn't look very good... But I like the colourful painting behind.

I am 55 and with my glasses on have to look to hard to read it and that just made me stop and close

I'll declare that I'm a big fan of pastels and muted tones. Heavy colours don't do it for me. I honestly could never get through your entire article. The hard colours are just to much for me. My eyes are hurting writing this review.

As for the body, Serina is spot on: There is just too much text. Don't forget about the merits of whitespace. Cramming everything together not only makes it hard to read, but it also makes a daunting at first glance.

Web pages are fluid, you really do have all the same you need. Extend the body after the fold and tone down the colours. The red titles don't do anything. Always use colours responsibly!

I like this background graphic a LOT. I think you could make it look less like a magazine article with much larger, ADD friendly headers and more space between header text and paragraphs. I suggest reducing the amount of text and maybe reduce the line spacing? If "pulse" is important perhaps you could remove some of the spatter behind it so that it has a nice halo of white space.