Alan Horne

Valentines Email Marketing

By Alan Horne

   on Jan 25, 2010
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Concept Reviews

  • Nick Pulido

    Nick Pulido

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    1 Vote
    Change the font in the copy area

    Posted on Jan 25, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    I would get rid of one of the two hearts. I would keep the one behind the banner and dump the one next to the message. Perhaps a car picture with the proper processing might work.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Looks good

    Posted on Jan 25, 2010 at 11:49 AM

    Overall looks good. I would remove the heart line divider and replace with a regular line divider. Also, use a different heart image rather than repeating what you have in the header. Good start here.

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    1 Vote
    background

    Posted on Jan 25, 2010 at 2:35 PM

    How about a pink background on the content-area?

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  • Harish Chouhan

    Harish Chouhan

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Colours

    Posted on Jan 25, 2010 at 3:54 PM

    I liked the original idea. Only thing I would love to see a change in would be the spacing between the main text, and more use of RED colour to make it brighter.

  • Tiffany Gagnon

    Tiffany Gagnon

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    play with the divider

    Posted on Jan 28, 2010 at 11:02 AM

    Its too straight, how bout making it curvier? I think that would incorporate it into the design a litte more. Have it S-curve from New Website up into the bottom left of the copy. Either that or make it completely straight and wider... it just seems like its kinda floating right now