Logo design for Moxie Parlour

I agree with previous comments. The business card translations are super excellent! Maybe just try shortening the M by five to fifteen percent? Maybe experiment with different heights. Just feels a bit too tall.

This is a good direction and is a great idea to use the top of the "m" as a hairline. However, the "m" is taking way too much of the focus. You want people to focus on the actual name more than the object.

I really like this, very sophisticated, great work.

At first was was going to agree about the size of the m, but seeing the way you use it in your examples I think that it works, I guess it could even stand on its own once people have been exposed to it for a while.

I think this is great. I particularly love how easily this design translates into various formats without losing any identity at all. Great work.

I suggest bringing the color curve to right forming a 'P' also and extending beyond that may give a falling hair effect.

• Need to work more on bottom line.

Between the Business cards are Awesome.

please find the attachments for some inspiration (just 4 inspiration).

I think you did a great job, I especially like how this logo translated to the business cards.

What id you used the darker indigo in either Moxie or Parlour? Just a thought : )

Good job

Beautiful design! I especially love your use of colour. The business cards and service guide are superb.

Great work :)

Love it. Good colors and the sweeping hair on the M says a lot without saying too much

I think this is great. I really like the colours and think it translates brilliantly to the business cards. I'd like to see a version with the colour curves a bit bigger so they fall into the space at the top of the m and look more like hair falling. Might tweak the positioning of the name by bringing it up a little bit too.

I think it's great, the only suggestion I'd try is perhaps make the swoop of hair a little bigger or try a lighter blue, when scaled down it might get lost.. maybe not though.. I think it's very strong as is.

in spain we have a letter looks like it: ñ M is smooth, but moxie parlour is corner.

Colours looks good.

M have a wave ? looks something fragile

I think the idea you have going here is right on the money. I think it's just too subtle for a salon. Maybe extend the pink and purple waves so that they break out of the shape of the m and catch the eye more. Also as another person already said, I think the name of the salon gets lost. I would definitely change the font to something more playful and think about ways to change the size relation between the m and moxie parlour (such as stacking moxie and parlour or simply making the stylized m the first letter of the moxie.