Poster

We are hiring should be the focal point of the poster. Perhaps changing the font, so that it's not so matchy matchy with the logo and other text.

I agree with Elly James!

• In addition the venue and event date are not readable as it is a poster it should be readable from certain range of sight.

• give importance to Band name and make the logo more prominent.

I like the background, but the choice of font makes me wonder if this is a new age band. The background implies that the band plays rock music (or some other form of loud music with screaming fans ;)). As a result, the identity of the band (might) be confusing here.

I would extend the crowd footer and put the "date" and "we are located..." text there. Currently it is a little hard to read.

Cheers, Serina

I think this is a good attempt, but isn't quite there. Your illustration could be a bit better and there isn't a whole lot of flow to the design. I would tie in the real image of the guitar into the design more. Right now it feels like its just sitting on top. Your typography is the biggest problem in my estimation. The font you chose is hard to read and isn't arranged very well. You need to keep tweaking this.

I am going to just summarise a few points, this is meant to be taken as constructive.

What position are you hiring for?

Who are rubber band?

Whats the date for?

Make people go mad with what? is that good or bad?

Why the computer type face on the people?

As well as all the other design comments, I really think you need to spend time on what you are trying to convey with this poster.

I like the meat of this design, and overall it's very good, but the text/font used in here could use a bit of change. The text is not so easy on the eyes.

Meanwhile, the text within those shadow guys at the bottom seems cramped.

I think what I have to say has already been said, albeit more eloquently by Chris Beddoe and Nate Hamilton.

There is just a lot of ambiguity here. Once they are all cleaned up I think you will have a good piece.

Keep it up.

I think the date and the info in general could be a bit clearer it is clear that it's a musical evening but what kind of music do you want to hire? What kind of acts have you had on in the bar before...(if you have) those sorts of ideas might work out.

I like the picture diagrams at the bottom of the page and the color scheme!

The font you chose for "we are hiring" makes it difficult for me to read it and for that it looses its purpose...

I think you have too many fonts that are clashing. When you make the logo more prominent, it makes that script more prominent which will clash more with the rest of the copy.

I like some of the illustrations you have here. Maybe incorporate some red tones elsewhere so that it doesnt stand alone in the guitar image.

Hi,

Simple & Very cute Design design . I like it.