Abdul-Hadi Hawari

NOVA Unlimited Engineering

By Abdul-Hadi Hawari

   on Jan 20, 2010
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  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Too cartoony

    Posted on Jan 20, 2010 at 9:36 AM

    All of these feel a bit too illustrated and cartoony for the subject matter. It's also a bit too stacked, try keeping it to two lines. Lastly, use imagery that helps describe who you are as a company.

    • Abdul-Hadi Hawari
      Posted: on Jan 20, 2010 at 11:26 AM

      OK, Thanks.. I'll try to create imagery for the company and keep it to two lines , but i was trying to escape from the old one which you can find in the Website Url header ..

      any idea for the imagery will be so helpful !?

      Thanks a lot.

    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Jan 20, 2010 at 1:27 PM

      I think you need to go pretty clean cut and subtle. The one I've attached is the closest to something I could find that works for you. Keep this design mature and established looking.

  • Elly James

    Elly James

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    The logo contains too many letters to really grab your attention. All it is is a bunch of text with a star burst. Not very original.

  • Tiffany Gagnon

    Tiffany Gagnon

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    I like the 3rd one

    Posted on Jan 20, 2010 at 10:23 AM

    I think the third one has the most potential. What is that circular glyph representing? I think the lines underneath have an x height that's a little too tall . I also think the cascading of the font size isn't working. Try to make Unlimited and Engineering the same size. Or make it so different that its obvious and looks intentional.

    Good luck!

    • Abdul-Hadi Hawari
      Posted: on Jan 20, 2010 at 1:51 PM

      Thanx , I will work on this..

      and the circular glyph representing something related to the space or so ;)

  • Fariz Suleiman

    Fariz Suleiman

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    "Unlimited Engineering" text is too big

    Posted on Jan 20, 2010 at 1:36 PM

    Third one is the best, but not good enough. Try to make this huge "unlimited engineering" much more smaller or get rid of it at all. Give it more time. It can be a very stylish logo.

    • Abdul-Hadi Hawari
      Posted: on Jan 20, 2010 at 1:55 PM

      in fact I can't get rid of it, coz it is our registered trademark

      but I'll try make it smaller ...

      Thanks.

    • Fariz Suleiman
      Fariz Suleiman commented:
      Posted: on Jan 20, 2010 at 2:28 PM

      Btw, circular glyph looks like a DeathStar from Star Wars. )

    • ivan ospina
      ivan ospina commented:
      Posted: on Jan 20, 2010 at 11:28 PM

      try to work with the font just a litle bit .... nice work !

  • Chris Beddoe

    Chris Beddoe

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    explosion

    Posted on Jan 22, 2010 at 10:54 AM

    I agree with most of the other comments.

    Not sure what the explosion represents, especially when they are an IT company??? It needs to tie in more. Maybe try some abstract shapes or using the letters in a different way.

    On 3 I thought the O was a moon and a star, especially as their website looks like its they are based in the middle east.

    Look forward to seeing your revisions.

    • Abdul-Hadi Hawari
      Posted: on Jan 23, 2010 at 3:26 AM

      Thanks for your review , and I'm currently working on the new concept ...

      And by the way the explosion represents a star shine , coz you know it's a name related to the space .

      Thank you.

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    wow...

    Posted on Jan 27, 2010 at 3:48 AM

    I'm not digging any of these I agree with Nate's comments, it's al a bit too much, colours are extreme, and I don't know that the font is working well.

    Having looked at the website, I not that you are software house, these logo's are all a bit too over bearing and extreme.

    I would suggest a serif font maybe museo 500, and try it in lowercase, with the star / planet either by itself or integrated but in a more professional way, maybe as a negative space?

    Anyway, I think you need to re-look at this and start again.

    Good Luck!

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    • Abdul-Hadi Hawari
      Posted: on Jan 27, 2010 at 5:00 AM

      WoW .... That's cool , thank you And I'm working on the new concept , it will be here soon ;)

  • Karthikeyan T

    Karthikeyan T

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    not make tagline as logo part

    Posted on Jan 20, 2010 at 10:16 AM

    work on NOVA with diff. font and manipulation