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   on Jan 18, 2010
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  • Shawn Hoefer

    Shawn Hoefer

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    simplify

    Posted on Jan 18, 2010 at 1:27 PM

    You've provided us with a lot of choices here. I like that. 1 & 2 are nice and fun typographically, however, the rosette on the I in 2 should probably go... it confuses. 3, 4, 5 & 9 do nothing for me - 9 is especially bad as I can't even make out the letters there without knowing what the others were. 5 & 6 confuse the word order - is it "like rabbits carrots?" 8 on the other hand I really like. Perhaps tuck the greenery behind the second r to improve readability. If I were the client, I would really choose 1 & 8 as a pair. Keep the colors similar, though.

    • firstname lastname
      Posted: on Jan 18, 2010 at 8:05 PM

      thanks for the comments! yeah i could not just pick one to post here for your critique, so i put all i had so i have more chances to have feedback on what looks good.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Your first concpt works the best

    Posted on Jan 18, 2010 at 2:18 PM

    The 1st concept works the best. I like the 7th concept as well but it messes with readability a bit too much. I'd say go with the first concept and add some sort of tagline describing what the company is all about.

    • firstname lastname
      Posted: on Jan 18, 2010 at 8:04 PM

      thank you for the feedback! i agree about the last one, it might need some tweaking.

  • Shane Wilson

    Shane Wilson

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
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    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Little of this and a little of that.

    Posted on Jan 18, 2010 at 4:51 PM

    I like #2 best but the color scheme in #1,6,7. It would really help to know why they picked this name.

    • firstname lastname
      Posted: on Jan 18, 2010 at 8:03 PM

      i see you like orange ;-). Well it is my alias. Ever since high school i liked carrots and everybody called me a rabbit/bunny for that.

  • Farshad Ali

    Farshad Ali

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Good stuff!

    Posted on Jan 18, 2010 at 7:10 PM

    I like # 7 and 8.

    I like 7 more though, though I would like to see the 'like' word shaped like a rabbit :D

    i.e. maybe have the top of the 'l' and the 'k' like bunny ears and the 'i' as the face? and the rest of the 'k' and the 'e' as maybe part of the body?

    even without though, I think you have some nice logos here.. Good work!!

    • firstname lastname
      Posted: on Jan 18, 2010 at 8:03 PM

      great ideas! i will definitely work on that! i will c what i can do with "like"

  • William Baker

    William Baker

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    Let whimsical be whimsical

    Posted on Oct 30, 2010 at 10:14 PM

    I can only assume that with a company name like that, you want us to think whimsical, goofy, absurdist, fun... #8 pushes fun and whimsical the farthest, so it's far and away my favorite. Phooey on the reviewer who's so anal as to worry about readability on the word "carrots"--it obviously says "carrots."

    I don't know what the purpose is so I gave that 3 stars (promotion is too vague--what's being promoted?). I'm not sure that this is great design but I'm not great enough to say what would make it great, I'm afraid. Top rating for engaging and original.

    The alphabet soups are cold and corporate, totally at odds with the name.

    6 and 7 have an ironic contrast of absurd and nonsensical words (not even sure how the words should be arranged--shades of Ionesco) with ultra-businesslike fonts in gray flannel color. An interesting concept but I think that's too much freight for a logo to carry, and the confusion of word order would cause many people to just give up.