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Concept Description
- Objective:
- Remember what the mission and vision are for Virtual School
- Target Market:
- Employees age 45-retirement
- Categories:
- graphics design poster
This poster will be printed in-house at 24x36. We will frame it and hang it at the Headquarters office and area offices of the virtual school branch. This is specific to one branch of many within the agency.
The colors match the colors of the virtual school identity.
The logo (blue ball thing at top) is not my design, but it was a requirement. The text is not mine and cannot be altered. Neither can the way VIRTUAL is spelled out in the middle. This is their text requirement.
The arrows pull from their "synched" icon created for their newsletter of the same name.
Previous Versions
Version 1
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Concept Reviews
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I like the colors and I think the design as a whole is quite nice.
I think you may be able to drop the DODEA MISSION and VIRTUAL HIGH SCHOOL VISION since it is a bit redundant given the large heading at top and bottom. then fill that area with a wider paragraph that runs along the top and bottom of the inner content. It may not work, but I find myself struggling to read the paragraphs since they have line breaks after every 2 or three words.
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maybe instead of a straight line in the middle, make that a curve similar to your arrows and break it diagonally? May or may not work!
Other than that I think it's a great improvement to your other version.
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I can't even tell you how much better this looks. You took this design to where it needed to go! Looks great, love the texture and the colors. Very well done!
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Angie commented:Thanks very much for the wonderful compliment! I tweaked it even more based on feedback and now I'm quite happy with it myself :)
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I think you did a great job revising your last concept. I really like the way you've made the main part of the poster pop off the page. Great work.. (sorry I have no other feedback.. I think it works great)
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Colors are tasty now :) Nice job!
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No negative feedback. Concept carried on very well. Color are too good for a poster.
You deserve to be a excellent designer.
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Are the fonts the same size for the two headings?
I understand the eed to use the "identity" colors and think they work well with the layout. Iove the curved divider - the straight line is too plain. The way the main content pops out is much nicer, and the textured frame around the whole concept isolates the content well.
I know this is much smaller than the final version, but how will the white text transfer to the printed poster? right now it seems a little week.
Other than that great work - as usual :-)
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Angie commented:
They aren't ;) You are the first to catch that. It was a mistake - but it's been fixed for the copy given to VS. I haven't printed full size yet, but I'll let you peek and give feedback when I print it!
Thanks martin
(nice pic!)
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schatten baum commented:In my oppion there are to much diffents between the fonts... :)
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I think that's a great idea. I will test that out in the morning, I bet it will balance it out -- the small column was bugging me but I couldn't think where to put the text besides there!
Thanks!