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I sense a little angst? "last ditch attempt"
OK its no http://www.subtraction.com/ however It looks quite serviceable to me .
The place holder content throws out my tired brain when Im looking for Target Market: Corporates, big businesses
but I can see this working out fine
chin up -put in some fresh content t take a deep breath and see if things look better.
I think this is pretty decent... the truth is, as designers we can work things to death when we just need to get them done.
I like it over previous versions, it feels clean and structured... but what I like most about it is that it looks like the type of interface you would see on the products the company is selling... which is interesting to me... it is subconsciously setting the stage for the product...
The truth is... code it up in a way that is easy to update/edit and you can make revisions/improvements in the future if you get a spark of inspiration!
A good, clean design - looks like it will accomplish its purpose.
My only suggestion is to make the phone number and email in the header a few points smaller. I'm sure they want it that way for people to contact them, but to me it borders on overpowering the importance of the logo.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks, and yes it does seem a little over powering I might just make it slightly smaller
The bottom line is that this works, but just feels a bit disorganized and some detail work is needed. The background is still not working, use a plain white background. You have some inconsistencies with your text treatments. Try use some of the same treatments throughout the page. The navigation also looks a bit odd with the drop down and the highlight. I would try and rework them. I'm not trying to be negative here, but I'm just not diggin' this yet.
no outstanding visual element, but keeping in mind that this is a corporate website, that's probably the way it is. looks marketable indeed. maybe a bit less textual information on the home page would do.
Cheers