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Concept Description
- Objective:
- Get a new image.
- Target Market:
- Anyone who needs it.
- Categories:
- logo corporate
This is an update of the old version. I made it based on all comments and let me say: They helped me a lot.
I hope you like it and if you want, you can help to improve more the improved versions (lol).
Btw, "Centro de negocios y oficinas virtuales" means: "Business center and virtual offices"
Regards, Andrés.
Previous Versions
Version 1
Concept Reviews
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Looks pretty good overall. I would suggest making the text a little bolder. I like the first design the best with the 2-tinted blue for the x. I think the capital N with lowercase letters looks a little awkward seeing as they are all the same size, but I don't think it looks bad either. Not sure if you really need the horizontal rule or not.
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Andy E commented:I agree that the n should be lowercase. Option 1 is working the best, but I think you should bold the ne and us more or reduce the stroke of the top left and bottom right of the x. The colors make it stand out enough.
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Chris Beddoe commented:I immediately thought the N should be lower case too. In terms of thickness you are in the middle at the moment, a bit boring, so make it bolder or even lighten it. Looks like a professional logo though, great work.
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I like the first two concepts a lot, particularly the 2nd one is striking. because of colours, i guess. however, there is something bothering me. why the letter "n" is capital? you can make it lowercase as in Aaran's version. Plus, the weight of letters is not balanced well. i see you tried to draw attention on X by making the other letters thinner in the name. however, the design of X and its colours already make it outstanding. so you don't need to make the other letters thinner to make people focus on X. my suggestion would be that make the letters in the name bolder.
speaking of tagline, go either for capital or lowercase. if you go for lower case, C in Centro must be lower case to balance with the rest. Also, use red from X for the tagline in the second version to connect the name and tagline.
overall, good work. with some small adjustements i'd definitely go for the 2nd one.
good luck.
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hey congrats dude this is much improved version then ur prev one..
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This has some legs but just needs to be messaged some more. Get rid of the baseline and play around with extending part of the "X" into the descender. Make the subheading smaller and less of a focal point. This could really work for you, just keep going.
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But there is no connection here... there is a visual divide.
That being said I think you could play with the scheme in #2 because there is a good contrast between the colors... different things coming together...
but don't make it too much like the google phone http://www.google.com/phone
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I like the one on the top. The color matches more wiht black
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Andres
this is coming along nicely...
I had a bit of a play, as after I commented on the last time I thought about what might make it really stand out, anyway see below my version...
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Andrés Fernández commented:Aaran.
Thanks for your help, you even made an own version. I really appreciate it. The truth, I liked it even more than my own designs so you mind if I take any idea from it?.
Regards.
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Eric Buchmann commented:I like the thicker font used, but I'm not sure if the wild paint splattered X really speaks "Business center and virtual offices"
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just looked at the old design, i prefer the lowercase n