Andrés Fernández

Nexus Logo

By Andrés Fernández

   on Jan 10, 2010
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  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    remove the background swirl...

    Posted on Jan 10, 2010 at 11:39 PM

    Andres

    It's a good start, I would probably ditch the bg swirl and the 'we provide you decide'

    tighten up the kerning a bit, make the text black and the x (one half red the other half orange)

    It's a great start keep it up...

    • Andrés Fernández
      Posted: on Jan 11, 2010 at 12:15 AM

      Thanks for your comment !! . I forgot to mention.. The office is soft blue so I think the Logo must be something related.

      Btw, what is kerning? sry my vocabulary isn't wide enough.

      And you mean.. black-black? or almost black?

      Regards!

    • Aaran Casey
      Aaran Casey commented:
      Posted: on Jan 11, 2010 at 1:52 AM

      make it black and then do x logo half pale blue half purple.

      good luck!

  • Andy E

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    remove the s and focus on the x

    Posted on Jan 11, 2010 at 8:22 AM

    This is a pretty good start. As others have mentioned, I'd remove the large S as well as the 'We provide, you decide' slogan. Change the nexus word to a darker gray or black and the bottom half of the x to your company color blue. Then, you could try to increase the size of the x if you want to add more emphasis. Otherwise, the half colored X will be good enough.

  • Alexander Charles

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    Too many font types

    Posted on Jan 11, 2010 at 8:31 AM

    concept is good, try to work more and remover the background

    • Andrés Fernández
      Posted: on Jan 11, 2010 at 4:16 PM

      I've read all of your comments and let me say Thanks for everyone of them.

      Also, I made a new concept based on your comments. Hope you like it and if you want, to help improve it as well :).

      THANKS!

  • Swarat Ghosh

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    remov the background "S"

    Posted on Jan 11, 2010 at 12:58 AM

    rest is nice..may be play around with bit of color!!

  • M. H.

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    tagline

    Posted on Jan 11, 2010 at 5:14 AM

    I think it is a bit too greyish. Try to set the font in bold and light blue and remove the "we provide...", because if you reduce the size, you won`t be able to read that anymore.

    I would keep the background like it is. But it should`t produce too much noise. So with blue letters it could work.

    Perhaps make the "x" bigger than the rest, so it is outstanding.

  • Nate Hamilton

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    Simplify

    Posted on Jan 11, 2010 at 8:11 AM

    Simplify this logo concept. Right now it feels very complex, with too many fonts, imagery and treatment. Keep it simple...