Frespiration! Logo

Very nice concept and logo! I like how you have the exclamation point down a little to line up with the tag line.

I think you need a touch more space between the i and r.

Can't wait to see the first issue!

Hey,

I have to say I like this logo concept, what kinda jumped to my attention is that the 2-nd paragraph ""share design collections" is very close to the top word...h from share almost touches the P and so on ...my recommandation is to make the font a lil smaller so that the bottom part still goes as far as the dot from the exclamation sign.

Anyway good job.

MEster.

The concept is awesome, but the top logo just don't work with the honeycomb effect inside it. personally I'd just leave it black on white or white on black with the slight drop shadow and highlights on the text.

This just feels a bit crunched and squeezed. I would try and space things out a bit and find a different placement for your tagline. This isn't a bad start, but could be a bit better.

I think you need to adjust the kerning in some areas

the s feels too far apart from the e and the p

first i too close to the r

the a too far from the r

second i too close to the o

also look at customizing the ascenders in the tagline - esp the h - it runs into the p

I like this it's well done, however it's a little to tight together!

the second one is the best, the first one will be hard to reproduce if it's ever printed.

I would make the "share the.." in caps in helvetica neueue condensed.

Good luck!

dont use carbon effect because is old

good start, congrats. however, the put more breathing space between the letters, particularly between i and r, in the 1st line.

plus, the tagline is too close to the 1st line. so push it down a bit and elongate the bottom part of p and exclamation point to line up everyhing.

good luck.

love the second version.