Ari Suardiyanti

The American Dream Sweepstakes Entry Page

By Ari Suardiyanti

   on Jan 04, 2010
4 Reviews3 Votes0 Favorites640 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Angie

    Angie

    Rank: 1 Elite

    1477

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
    1 Vote
    The maximum prize value text

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 12:26 PM

    Overall this is a great design for the purpose. Yes, it's a little busy and loud, but that's what you'd expect with a sweepstakes page! I really think you've done an excellent job with this design.

    I would play a little more with the "maximum prize value" text. It looks a little off. Maybe make everything, except the dollar amounts, smaller?

    Nicely done!

    • Ari Suardiyanti
      Ari Suardiyanti commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 4:50 PM

      Thanks for the review. That's actually not a bad idea, I'll try to pay attention on that next time. :)

  • Omprakash N

    Omprakash N

    Rank: 3 Superior

    926

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Price Element

    Posted on Jan 05, 2010 at 12:29 AM

    Design and colors where good. But soo many busy element but the main price element is not highlighted well.

    Over all good job..!!

  • Michael Minter

    Michael Minter

    Rank: 3 Superior

    900

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Clouds

    Posted on Jan 09, 2010 at 4:52 PM

    You could really afford to custom design the clouds at the top of the page. It would really make this more appealing and "worth" looking at.

    Nice use of color.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    BUSY BUSY BUSY

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 8:14 AM

    I know my rating is a bit harsh here but I think that the business is killing this site. I think you have some great elements within this design but it needs to simplified in a big way.

    • Ari Suardiyanti
      Ari Suardiyanti commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 10:21 AM

      Yeah, I know. This was the final revision after 7 of it. I tried to simplify the designs, but the contest holder guide it to become this. I really appreciate your review :)