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It took me a while to figure this one out. At first it looks like a circus, so you hit that well, but then I only thought this was a circus. It wasn't until I went to the website that I found out it was a club. Your target audience would probably know it's a club, or people in that town more so than myself.
I think it looks really good. The colors are really vibrant and catchy, things look to be in the right places and it has a lot of unification with the color and that sunburst in the background.
The only things I would modify would be some tiny font spacing, but I'm just picky about that and I know most clients would never see it anyways.
The page with "Thank you" I found it a little hard to read the right aligned text. We're well trained to read left to right so with the left side being all over the place I skipped over it a lot easier.
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Very nice, love the CD packaging, looks really good. Very different then most things out there which is good. Fantastic my friend, very well done.
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I think that everything is perfect. Good concept. Good job.
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I really love the design you've done. The type face choice is right on. The old photos with the new photos work well together. Dig the candy cane border. Once opened, the inside just blows me away.
Awesome job!
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I didn't really think about the right alignment until you mentioned it. You're right about that, we're all trained to read left to right. Thanks for the advice/review :) definitely will consider the paragraph alignment on next project.