Michael Moran

Logo for SEO and Webdesign Company

By Michael Moran

   on Dec 30, 2009
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  • Eric Buchmann

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    letter spacing?

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 10:41 AM

    The thing I see is the letter spacing. It's really tight, and in some areas it looks a little weird. The t and h how the tail of the t comes above the serif on the h and then the a and r how they come together. Just seems like it can break the flow of the text if you really look at it. (Of course, most clients won't look at these things anyways)

    I was thinking maybe the TM could be resting above the top right of the k instead of jutting out of the entire logo.

    I like the symbol - I think the smaller one is better, the large one is too much. I think the logo can go with or without it.

    I like it more with the drop shadow, I don't see the shadow in the 4th one and it seems to have nicer coloring / shadowing in the 3rd one.

    • Angie
      Angie commented:
      Posted: on Jan 03, 2010 at 10:11 PM

      That about sums up what I was thinking too!

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 5:18 PM

      Yeah kerning was bothering me too. I will have to upload some new versions. TM will probably stay in its current position. I played with this originally, but it looked odd above the K. Thanks for the feedback.

  • Jonathan Butko

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    Spark needs to simplify

    Posted on Dec 31, 2009 at 10:16 AM

    I know that this is for a web company, but I imagine at some point this logo would show up in print. That being said, the spark becomes muddled in form especially when you consider having to shrink it down in size.

    When you take a few steps back from the screen to simulate a reduction in size, the lines become blurred together and it ends up looking like a spiked ball... or those mines they used at sea in WWII to destroy ships and subs...

    I think reducing the spark's complexity would go a long way

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 05, 2010 at 11:21 AM

      Any thoughts on how to simplify the spark? Thanks for your feedback.

    • Jonathan Butko
      Jonathan Butko commented:
      Posted: on Jan 08, 2010 at 3:36 PM

      sorry it took me so long to get back... don't know if you have done anything to it... but if you look at reducing the number of lines in the spark it would help it breathe a bit at smaller sizes

  • Chris Taylor

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    liven up the logo

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 4:18 PM

    The logo is clean but stale. I'd like to see more "spark" within the letters and move away from the Christmassy feel of the "snowflake/star".

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 5:20 PM

      Yeah maybe it's just the time of the year with Christmas on everyone's mind. Thanks for the feedback.

  • Jasper Oelers

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    Clean and tight

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 10:34 AM

    Looks very clean and tight. I like the simplicity of the text combined with the 'complexity' of the spark. Nice work Michael.

    • Heidi Kørner Mikkelsen
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 6:43 AM

      I think the last one is the best one. The background fits better to the spark. I agree that the spark could be more simpler. otherwise it´s good, I like it. But it dosen´t reminds me of a design company, more of a bank or a house sales company.

  • Delly

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    Design on a white background.

    Posted on Jan 02, 2010 at 9:36 PM

    1. The spark is too complex and may have difficulties translating to all forms of media (embroidered shirts, hats, etc.) It also looks like a snowflake at first glance.

    2. Logos typically aren't always on a dark background. You need to ensure these colors have the desired effect on a white background. Try not to design a background when logo designing because it can often limit its extensibility.

  • Jason Comely

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    Make ithe logo easier to replicate on all mediums

    Posted on Jan 01, 2010 at 9:57 PM

    It's a really great design. You've got skillz Michael.

    That aside, I have to concerns with the design. First is that the logo isn't easily replicated on other mediums. The best logos are the ones that look the same whether it's embroidered on articles of clothing or hand drawn. Like McDonald's golden arches. Nuff said.

    The other thing that gave me a bit of a jolt was the "nice non-offensive name" comment. Being nice and not offending people is always important, but it's not going to help a brand stand out from the pack.

    Best of luck to you Michael!

  • Codedude

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    simplify the star design

    Posted on Jan 02, 2010 at 9:37 AM

    right now the star won't look good at small sizes. Simplify it and I think you'll have a great design. I really like the font you used. Also the color choices are good.

  • Heidi Kørner Mikkelsen

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    the logo reminds med of a bank

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 6:46 AM

    I think the last one is the best one. The background fits better to the spark. I agree that the spark could be more simpler. otherwise it´s good, I like it. But it dosen´t reminds me of a design company, more of a bank or a house sales company.

  • Jeff Robinson

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    Different colour choice

    Posted on Jan 06, 2010 at 9:16 AM

    Just because the company is in the "north" does need to translate into a "cold" design. The spark can be confused for a snowflake.

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    Number 1 (has to be)

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 6:51 PM

    I don't know if its just that time of year -but it would have to be number 1 because the others invoke Christmas card . Granted the crystalline structure of a snow flake and the abstract rendering of a "sparkler" could foil even the best of us. I have stop looking know it is taking on a religious optical illusion..

  • Swarat Ghosh

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    i love the one without the "spark"

    Posted on Dec 31, 2009 at 3:04 PM

    i feel if u want to incorporate "spark" symbol make it simpler at the moment it looks complicated...

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 05, 2010 at 2:36 PM

      It seems that is the general feedback I am getting. Often times simple is harder. Thanks.

  • Garden Book

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    Nothing.

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 10:52 AM

    I like the last one the best. It looks to boring without the sparkle with it.

  • Adam Goodenough

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    Number 4

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 11:11 AM

    is definitely the one to go with. I would also say it would look fine with upright letters.

    Spark is a good word to use.

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 5:19 PM

      Upright as opposed to the slight shearing?

    • Adam Goodenough
      Adam Goodenough commented:
      Posted: on Jan 06, 2010 at 6:06 AM

      Yes. But that's just me, personally. So many logos these days use slanted letters.

  • Erica Kolton

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    Simplify the spark

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 1:15 PM

    I like the third logo with the spark offset. I would simplify the spark some. The position is great as well as the font treatment. I think the light blue lines in the middle of the spark looks too much like a snowflake. Maybe a yellow color instead?

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 5:19 PM

      Yeah I was going for a wintery, spark that could also be a snow flake. Thanks for the feedback.

  • Richard Banfield

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    Reduce the reliance on the background

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 1:32 PM

    This is a good simple logo but without the gradient background it'll be tough to get it looking as good. The top logo is my favorite. The 'spark' looks like a religious star icon to me.

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 5:20 PM

      Religious? I guess I can see that. Thanks for the feedback.

  • S. Preston Chuhon

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    I love it.

    Posted on Jan 01, 2010 at 12:54 AM

    I actually like the first one, but the stars are quite nice too.

    It might be just me, but the bottom make the name read "norths park" for some reason. The spark image takes away from the two font colors. Pretty minor optical issue though...splitting hairs.

  • Kai Rostcheck

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    Your name doesn't match your business concept

    Posted on Jan 01, 2010 at 11:47 AM

    Hi Michael, it's a great name and a very clean logo design, but as you said "it is abstract." There's a book called "Made to Stick" which (in my opinion) is an outstanding guide to catchy marketing. One of the 6 principles they cover is "Avoid abstraction." We need to be concrete in order to convert interest in to action.

    You want your name to be something that people would immediately associate with SEO. Better yet, you want a name that will produce search results!

    I hope this doesn't sound too critical. Like I said, I like both the name and the design, but I'm not sure they are going to help you reach your ultimate goal. So I'd rather have you reconsider the idea at this early stage in your precess.

    Good luck!

  • Aaran Casey

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    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 7:03 PM

    Enough said here I think. No1 is the only one that really works.

    The only thing is I don't get the SEO part, maybe integrate something more web development / SEO into the logo, seperating north and spark a bit.

    Great work Keep it up!

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 5:21 PM

      Any suggestions for integrating web/seo?

    • Aaran Casey
      Aaran Casey commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 5:31 PM

      ok how about splitting up the north and the spark and inserting a infinity sign made up of different sized spheres?

  • Mark Demel

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    Spark

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 8:24 PM

    Like the name - catchy. Spark looks like north star, star of bethlehem, or stained glass... very Christian feel. Do you want that?

    I think you're looking for energy and different and power...I'd love to see you brainstorm crazy fresh ideas to come up with a really cool spark rather than settle for tweaking existing elements.

  • Omprakash N

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    Perfect logo

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 10:51 PM

    Great work michael. my favorite is option 3

  • xujiaxiang 追风筝的人

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    I like the last one

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 10:59 PM

    I like the last one

  • Alexander Charles

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    Clean work

    Posted on Dec 31, 2009 at 1:39 AM

    2nd one is really gud.

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    clean work

    Posted on Dec 31, 2009 at 8:18 AM

    i agree with Eric Buchmann about the TM. The rest looks very slick and clean. good work.

  • Brian Hoffman

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    simplify the spark

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 1:18 PM

    I think the logo is nice, but what happens when you shrink the final logo down? The complexity of the spark will be lost. Maybe simplify it somewhat.

  • Al Newkirk

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    Use the second image

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 6:32 PM

    I'm not sure how well the second image would look when scaled done really small, but I love the colors, font, everything.

  • Ashokcumar

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    Gr8

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 9:20 PM

    I like al logos looks very nice

  • Nate Hamilton

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    Very nice

    Posted on Jan 05, 2010 at 5:44 PM

    Third concept is the best. Nice font and imagery choice. Looks fresh and different. Nothing bad to say, I think you have a fantastic design on you hands here.

    • Michael Delpierre
      Posted: on Jan 06, 2010 at 9:15 AM

      love the simplicity and font. Maybe you could do a comp of the spark coming out of the name of the company?

  • Chris Ramaglia

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    Modify the spark some

    Posted on Jan 02, 2010 at 3:07 PM

    Nice work on this all around. The type especially is really strong and the colors work, going with all lower case was a good choice too.

    As far as the spark, we're a web design/seo shop and I can see the concept, the only modification I would suggest would be to layer the spark with some dimension to convey the idea that by hiring them, they would provide their clients with the "spark" to gain new business/exposure.

    Great job buddy.

  • Laura Blalock

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    The blues are nice.

    Posted on Jan 02, 2010 at 8:52 PM

    I like the last one best. The star over the spark adds a nice emphasis. You might want to simplify it for business card sizes though.

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    simplify spark

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 3:17 AM

    I know everyone else has said it already but I'll put my two cence in. The spark is lovely on screen but it will definitely not work across all media. I dont think you actually need to change it that much - just delete a few lines thats all. Excellent type though, this part works really well.

  • Steve Dolan

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    the Spark

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 4:03 AM

    I agree with most of the folks here. I don't see a difference between #3 and #4 other than the background, which has nothing to do with the logo at all.

    The spark is nice, but it big and alone by itself on the top of the logo doesn't seem to be working. I would "half" the spark horizontally and place it between the ascenders of the H and K, resting on the h-s-p-a-r.

    And I agree that it still needs to be simplified.

  • Dan Allen Pantinople

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    spark

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 10:37 AM

    i like the overall but i think you could still make the spark simpler..^^ number 4! ^^

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 5:17 PM

      Thanks for the feedback. Any ideas to make it simpler?

  • K.S.S Weerasinghe

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    Avoid using the icon

    Posted on Jan 06, 2010 at 9:41 AM

    the icon of he logo is good when its used in bigger sizes, but what is u are going to use it in a favicon or as a small footer icon.. troublesome..

    try using a bigger and better contrasted icon for the logo.. probably an icon which is easy to remember

  • Ben Lind

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    Spark

    Posted on Jan 09, 2010 at 10:09 AM

    I love the design - very clean, well-chosen font, simply executed.

    I just had one idea for you - if you were to use the "spark" design by itself with no text to help out, could you somehow put a "north" mark on the top of it? Like make the icon double as both a spark and a compass rose. I've attached an image of what I mean.

    It might make it more meaningful.

    • northspark.jpg
    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 12, 2010 at 4:18 PM

      Hmm, I like this idea. I originally started off by using a compass as my first design. Couldn't make it fit so I went with a "cold" spark. I might play around with this a bit. Very much appreciated. Thank you.

    • Ben Lind
      Ben Lind commented:
      Posted: on Jan 12, 2010 at 9:05 PM

      It was just an idea, but if you designed it well, it could work.

  • Nathan Parikh

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    spacing

    Posted on Jan 12, 2010 at 3:07 PM

    are the "h" in north and "s" in spark supposed to be merging? I like the spark concept.

  • K C

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    Size, placement of spark

    Posted on Jan 12, 2010 at 4:28 PM

    Simple and clean. I like the placement of the spark on the third concept best, as well as the color. I would try making the spark slightly smaller and closer to the text. Also, I like the name - it reminds me of north star, which gives it a stand out and inspiring feel. The colors definitely match with the name. I really like it.

  • Rik Konings

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    simple and elegant

    Posted on Jan 23, 2010 at 2:52 AM

    Font looks very good. Maybe increase the contrast between the two words a little bit more.

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    Put the spark on the same line

    Posted on Jan 24, 2010 at 3:15 AM

    I agree with other reviewers. The spark could be simpler. It looks kinda like a snowflake.

    What about putting it either before or after the company name?

    I like the logo otherwise. It's crisp and clean.

    Another thought? Do you really need the TM? Your design is very clean, why not kill the TM and make it cleaner? Most companies don't show the TM anymore. IMO it's tacky.

  • Pierluigi Tassi

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    sparkling

    Posted on Jan 06, 2010 at 9:39 AM

    I'd prefer to sparke the mark on the right just after the logo, to introduce your customer that's a target, a point to follow. More, the sparkle should be more simple and bolder, something more an octagonal asterisk or what you want.

    Color is a felt cold, you could use its warm complement.

  • Peter Safwat

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    Perfect

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 8:13 AM

    I like number 3

  • Felix Sim

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    I will align the starburst on the left hand side

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 10:38 AM

    Overall color used is okay except the Starburst is either too big or not in proportion with the Text Logo.