Concept Reviews
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I like the black/green color theme but the main photo could be edited better. The grooms back of the head could use a little "burning" (darken the white light), as could the bride's front of her neck. Otherwise, I like it :)
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Hi,
I think you are going in the right direction, but it feels something is missing.
I think the main content isn't working - I would try to remove the borders or make them darker instead of lighter than the main background.
Decrease the font size and make the overall page with round corners.
Kind regards.
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You're going in the right direction. There's a few things that look like they need cleaning up. The blending of the guy's hair, there is a lot of white pieces. The gradient behind the words s too noticeable, and I feel like the green button bar is not too attractive. Perhaps toning back that green a bit would help. I really like the embellishments on the small photos, and the main gray background is really nice. Keep it up.
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Andy E commented:Thanks for the feedback, Kyle. The photo is temporary - the bride and groom haven't supplied me with their photos yet. I'm not sure what you mean by "the gradient behind the words is too noticeable". Could you please explain?
I've toned down the border around the boxes, replaced the swirl at the top with something nicer, and removed the glow behind the title text. I'll submit a revised concept soon.
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It's a bit basic but I think it could work for your purposes. The image needs to be reworked, it doesn't blend well. On the cutout of the people you can still see the white background in a lot of places. You also cut her fingers pretty bad. The site in general is pretty dark for being a wedding site. Just my thoughts, hope they help.
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Andy E commented:
Appreciate the feedback, but the picture was temporary/FPO and therefore a rough cutout. I didn't want to spend any more than a few minutes cutting out the photo since I will be receiving a different one soon.
Believe it or not, they didn't want a white website with their black and green accents used throughout. Their save the date is completely black with the green font.
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Please note that I mentioned the main photo is temporary in the description above. Thanks.