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It looks like the front of the card may have a small drop shadow on the elements. Then on the back it seems to have a different one, which I think is a little too much, I like the way the text looks on the front.
When I read the name, phone, website, and skype? on the back I really don't even look at the part where it says EMAIL, TELEPHONE, WEBSITE, SKTPE (is that meant to be skYpe and just a typo?). Somehow the dark letters get really lost right next to the yellow letters, maybe swapping the order for them so the EMAIL comes before j.smith@.... part?
Other than that, they look pretty cool.
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The presentation over powers the product for me -that being said the presentation is very nice just overpowers the cards themselves which is the main point no?.
While I find your project arty and neat I'm not sure the cards themselves are a great business tool .
The front is happening apart from the John doe silhouette.
The back is very hard to read even "blown up"
I think all the parts are here and I appreciate the arty neato aspect however I would adjust the contrast to have words letters and numbers jump out as indeed this is there purpose.
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I agree about the shadow on the back, strange feeling, you should remove it.
Also regarding the domain nam, in my opinion it shouldn't be displayed at the top right corner. Only in the back should be fine.
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though not quite sure about the back mainly readability
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besides the use of drop shadows, i like how it turned out...it looks good...^_^
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Demetrio Viviani commented:thanks for the answers.
arrows have a purely evocative. I liked the overall picture that reminds a little 'factories of the '70s. Indeed links are redundant. Now I try to change according to your specifications. Thanks
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Leaving apart not understanding the arrows and cant linking it with the steel industry... you have the website and the name and the email doubled on each side...? I would prefer keeping a side for the company branding which will be the LOGO & website... and on the other side would be the name and info... plus it would be cheaper to print ;)
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Demetrio Viviani commented:
thankyou for the answer. my last replay was for your review
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website url looks a little awkward up there, and I'd ditch the shadows. besides that, awesome design :)
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great design, however the person looking like a chalk outline at a crime scene is a bit distracting.
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Between the man waiving and the arrows this design is feeling pretty random to me. Your black text and the maroon background is also pretty hard to read.
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Like the concept in general I just struggle with the contact info. The contact method is dark and not obvious.
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I like the design. Maybe switch out the black font for a pale yellow or white?
thanks for your reply. is true the shadow on the back is different. I wanted to give more prominence to the name, which is the important thing in the back of the card.
between the written and the dark yellow is a separator that is in fact too attached. almost take it off or try to separate a bit '
thanks a lot!