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first one stands fine
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number 1 and 3 looks great and elegant...but i think number 1 stands out the best!
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for a clothes and accessories shop i think number 1 fits the best. you have great concepts but certainly you shouldnt stop here.
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Maybe check out how other ampersands look with the first one? It's not bad, I just like the ones that look more like a G than a q...
1 maybe try to give "accessories" a little more breathing room, it's pretty crowded in there compared to "clothes &"
3 reads CC - andy andy to me
4 is too blocky
Just an idea, not even sure how it would work - For the first change "clothes" to "clothing", remove the "&" and attempt to make the first "y" into an ampersand, although it may make it look completely awkward...
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:thank you so nuch for your suggestions! i will try it! but first, mind telling me what ampersand means? sorry
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The first one, and the last one..
to me these 2 win! =D
The 4th is too strange ... =/
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logo doesn't standout enough. colors blend too much. the white spot in behind the logo helps, but it logo makes the logo more difficult to read. it takes a few seconds to read the logo, and it shouldn't take that long.
i like the logo style, but it needs to be more simple.
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will wait for more though
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The first and the third look good, but I prefer the first. It looks elegant, which is your aim. However, I don't really like the color of the logo...
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Bryan Mathews commented:I think they are all a bit too crowded with stuff. I would keep it more simpler. Look at McDonalds logo. It's a simple one letter "M"
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I would go for the 1st and last one. I prefer the 1st.
However try to work at the kerning / proportions so that the clothes and accessories have mathematical exact distances from the descenders of the main font.
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It would be useful to know what kind of clothing and accessories are in the store. the background is part of brand?
Anyway: 1 - very nice but I'm afraid that is a bit 'unreadable 2 - I do not manage to reach the goal 3 - I think is better, but removing the lettering below the logo 4 - too simple 5 - is not a brand but a written
good work!
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
thank you for your review...^^ all i know is she sells trendy dresses, and everything a girl would want in these days...i dont know much though because i dont buy there! the backgrpund is there to present the logo, it is all up to her what she would want...^^
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Demetrio Viviani commented:know one thing: I would add a touch of feminility. not that we should use the pink :) but maybe you could add some tinsel
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
ok, now shes asking me to put some colors in it, she loved the first one...sorry but can i ask whats a tinsel?
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
she contacted me that she loved the style of the first one all i need to do is add some colors...she specified that she would want the colors from the logo of this : http://mac.softpedia.com/screenshots/Kitchen-Brigade_1.jpg ....
and she asked me if i could add some glow...so i did everything that she wanted and please look at the last image...^_^
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As per the requirements of making this logo "elegant and simple" than the first design hits the spot.
Though I'm not sure elegant is what you should be aiming for considering the playfulness of the store's title "candycandy".
thank you for your review..^_^