Concept Reviews
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Sorry for the "1984" reference... too many "pluses" and the four boxes feel a bit boring and static... I was trying to think of ways you could integrate the word PLUS with the mark to create a more seamless identity and make it feel a bit more dynamic... I uploaded an idea(very quick sketch) just really trying to break away from the static and maybe spark some experimentation in form... maybe stack "Web & Graphic Solutions" underneath... not sure... interesting challenge!
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Really like the font and colours used, you might not need the top section though, maybe the Plus and web & graphic solutions works on it's own! Think the idea is very good though! Well done :)
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Metin Ucar commented:Thanks for the comment and thought. But I'll keep the colourful squares.
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while i like the icon and colors i think the plus in p is already redundant...IMO that is..^_^
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Metin Ucar commented:
I've removed the plus sign form the letter P as you recommended. How does it look now?
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I think the first logo is great with the + removed as a counter. Other than that I think its good : )
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When I first saw the four blocks I didn't really understand them until I read "Plus", and then I could figure out the negative space being a + sign. I think the logo could go better without them, they seem to take up a ton of space. Maybe they could be smaller and to the left of the P with about the thickness of the letters for negative space between the four blocks. That would also help fit the "web & graphics solutions" underneath the entire thing to create a rectangle instead of the awkward shape this entire logo creates right now.
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It just seems like this aesthetic including placement AND color combination has been done and over-done far too many times (Google, M$ Windows, etc). Maybe try experimenting with symbols for synonyms of "plus" like greater, additional, etc.
The font is excellent.
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Metin Ucar commented:
Tnx Michael, I'll keep in mind what you pointed out and play around to improve it. In fact, I've already made some changes on the concept. You can view the updated version here. If you have any comment on the newest one, I'd be happy to hear.
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simple and clear concept
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Metin Ucar commented:
I want to have a simple colourful shape reminding of the plus sign. So, I guess, I'll keep the blocks. but thanks for the thought.
apropos, I've updated the concept and uploaded a new picture. Please take a look and let me know what you think now.
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In my opinion, just the
"Plus Web & Graphic solutions"
is enought...
The + sign made with the colours, kind remind me a drugstore sign.... :p
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Eduardo F. Dutra commented:no, i dont actually saw one, but just came into my mind a drug store when i look at it :p
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Or make these blocks smaller and put them on the left from "PLUS" typo... also slogan should be small and placed closer to "PLUS"
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Metin Ucar commented:
thanks Pawel. I've updated the concept according to the critics. Please take a look. Am I getting there now?
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The second logo looks really good. My only suggestion is to lose the "+" on the "p". It's overdone, the plus sign between the colors are more than enough. Good work so far.
Hej Jonathan,
Thanks for the thought and sparing your time to visualise your idea with a sketch. Surely, it looks good and very modern. However, in this concept I'd like to stick to this simple idea, even though it's kinda old fashioned. I'll keep your idea in my mind for prospective projects.