Anika Dhir

Tribute to Micheal Jackson

By Anika Dhir

   on Jul 06, 2009
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Concept Reviews

  • Rachel Nelson

    Rachel Nelson

    Rank: 3 Superior

    167

    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
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    Your project

    Posted on Aug 13, 2009 at 11:52 AM

    I read your profile and see this is an assignment, I think what you need to do is think of a more original project if you weren't given the subject.

    If you can't do that then you need a better image of Michael and maybe fade the text so it's more of a background than readable

    or

    make the text more readable by giving the titles more space on the left and right and doing something different with the album titles the capitals are too subtle.

    Really you need a better project though

  • Nabil Medjebeur

    Nabil Medjebeur

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    156

    • Design: 0
    • Purpose: 0
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 0
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    model and background

    Posted on Aug 13, 2009 at 8:21 PM

    you should change effects on the model, and the background should seem more "background" than a "text"