Rajavel Ramasamy

Zajil Express Logo Design

By Rajavel Ramasamy

   on Dec 21, 2009
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  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    Colours are nice

    Posted on Dec 22, 2009 at 12:22 AM

    Raj

    The colours are nice, but I am not digging the overall design...

    z and a and j look out of place, the i and l are working well...

    I see what you are trying to achieve it's just not quite there yet...

    Good luck

  • Dan Browne

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    Colours and the A

    Posted on Dec 22, 2009 at 2:08 AM

    The A to me looks kinda funny. Like its on a tilt. I like the idea though, and maybe the tilted a is symbolising speed?!? Also not too keen on the colours. They feel kinda like angry colours to me... But that might just be me.

  • Adam Goodenough

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    The bottom text

    Posted on Dec 22, 2009 at 7:19 AM

    Do not use Trebuchet. It's a screen font and not meant for print applications. If you want something similar, try Meta. It's much more elegant and won't give you the letterspacing problems you currently have. Plus, the Meta Family has many diferent weights, you should choose one closer to the thickness of the ZAJIL letters.

    • Rajavel Ramasamy
      Posted: on Dec 22, 2009 at 7:21 AM

      Thank you so much. This input is very new to me. Will be taken care...

  • Alexander Charles

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    Hi Raj,

    Posted on Dec 22, 2009 at 8:50 AM

    I liked the concept, but if possible u can reduce the boldness of the font, and the yellow typo also, try diff color.

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    boldness

    Posted on Dec 22, 2009 at 11:38 AM

    seems a little to heavy/thick. other than that, seems to serve its purpose..

  • Zeno Popovici

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    Font

    Posted on Dec 22, 2009 at 1:05 PM

    Hey Rajavel,

    My two ideas on this are:

    1. Try to work on the kerning of the text in the logo (upper part), it's not consistent.
    2. Why are you using 2 opposite fonts? The main one is in straight sharp lines, the description has rounded smooth corners ... it throws the whole thing off balance.

    Cheers, Z.

  • Nate Hamilton

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    Keep workin'

    Posted on Dec 22, 2009 at 7:46 AM

    This isn't a bad start. I like the way you have the "a" sitting on top of the "Z". i would let the "j" run into the "a". The dot on the "I" needs to be a different color, maybe orange? You also need to change the font that your tagline is in and make it smaller and aligned right. You could also play around with making that the same color as the "I". Good start, just keep refining.

  • Scott Purcell

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    the mark for the "i"

    Posted on Dec 25, 2009 at 2:17 PM

    I really like the idea but the triangle dot for the "i" stands out (not because of the color) but I think because it's a triangle. Perhaps try a rectangle and see out that work...almost like a package. Maybe even have it move like the a between the "j" and the "l".

    I really like the moving "a" very clever.

  • Ashokcumar

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    nice

    Posted on Dec 25, 2009 at 10:59 PM

    I like this logo very much! one suggestion make yellow little bit dark.

  • sathar shameer

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    Life is about improvements - yes but a few!

    Posted on Dec 25, 2009 at 11:16 PM

    Looks like a natural stuff to me as guys here have cited out a lot of improvement points. No need to bother though, do some changes and make someone say lo! we have a class logo here!

    Merry Christmas to all & V.V.Happy New Year!

  • Tiffany Gagnon

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    Spacing

    Posted on Dec 28, 2009 at 2:47 PM

    The spacing between the letters looks accidental. I would work more with the white space to have it look clean and intentional. For example, have the same width of white space between the z and the a as the a and the j.

    Good start though

  • Kapil Dev

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    nothing to change

    Posted on Dec 24, 2009 at 7:45 AM

    it's a very original and creative, apart I love the design