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Concept Reviews
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I like the start of this logo. The text, colors and coffee cup are great. My sticking point with this logo is the object sticking out of the cup. Try to just have a spoon sticking out the top or maybe leave it empty. Keep working with this one...
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Nate Hamilton commented:Lol, yeah, I didn't see that :) Keep workin' on it, it's a great concept.
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Like the idea, font is good but change of color between e and r is distracting. Image is okay...perhaps showing the brown liquid in cup or adding steam lines would add some "flavor" to it...
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The second for sure. It keeps the whole idea better. I have nothing to add.
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but the cup edges are not done properly same with pen didnt like it buddy...try to create better outline for the objects..
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
thanks for the review..but i meant it that way so it may look like it was "drawn"..but i agree with the pen, i just realized i didnt like it either..well ill make a new one..^_^
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i love everything else but i think the pencil is getting in the way...try making some new pencils..or remove it.
i especially love the font you used..nice!
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
thanks chams! yeah, id say i agree with you! well, time for version 2.
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The coffee report sounds like a professional thing, yet the cup and pencil don't look professional at all.
I would look at changing that aspect of the design, but i love what done with the text.
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
you miight be right...ill try some more designs on it...^^ thanks for your review..^^
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Carlos Hermosillo commented:I like the overall simplicity in this design. I wonder what it would look like if you were using a pen vs. a pencil? Either way, I prefer the pencil illustration on the top. Nice work!
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
thanks carlos..seeing as you are new here i think you should post this as a review...in this page, fill up the forms inlcuding the ratings at the upper right side...then submit review..that should help^_^
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im liking it very much! simplicity = beauty!
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Second one is more accurate to the concept
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i like the text and font style but the cup with the pen doesn't look good for me :| maybe u can try making the effect that the cup is filling the text with coffee or something :)
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Would agree with the pencil not looking right. I like everything else though. Does the cup have a slight gradient behind it? I cant tell. If not, then maybe add a slight radial gradient behind the cup, as if there is some light coming from behind it. Maybe try a very slight almost unnoticeable gradient on the text if you haven't already.
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I think the coffee and the pen doesn't suit the name "coffee report" here, like everyone said, they don't look professional :p
thanks for the review but the pencil is not sticking out..its supposed to show that the coffee cup is being drawn...i guess i failed in that one...lol..^_^