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though im not a big fan in these designs, i think the second one is the best of the three...with the folding ofthe prodcutions part..but you just need to reduce the opacity of your drop shadows a bit..
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2nd & third are really gud, a suggestion, try to reduce the inner shadows and give a try.
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
there shadows lightened, dont mind number 1, its already scrapped...i just didnt want to delete it here though for me to see my progress..^_^
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maybe you can lessen the shadows in the first one a bit..the rest are nice!
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Don't separate productions from the tag. I really like the tag idea, try to develop that more. Maybe add some stitching around the tag? Great start!
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
great idea! thanks for your review and suggestions! ive learned so much here...^_^
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Love the second one...just move the word "dream" away from the edges
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
thank you for the review..^_^ ill try what you suggested!
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I like very much it.. But I just think that the tipography of "dream" is a little out of the way.
The rest is great for me. The shadows are good too in the third one.
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I like it alot just maybe change the shadow as swarat ghosh said.
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I like the idea you have going on and the overall aesthetic look that you're going for. I think it's almost done.
What bothers me most is the box you've put everything in. It doesn't seem appropriate to use words that conjure up ideas of freedom and motion and smoothness such as "dream" and "fluid" and then put them in something so rigid and structured as a box.
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
thank you foor your review! i think your opinion is also right but i'll stick with this one..i think its just one paradox of life..lol
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dream is touching the corners give small space..
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
thanks once again! well i guess you're right..need to reduce the shadows in the first...but i meant the dream to touch that corners..^_^
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
i have! in every design you have that i see..coz i liked everything you've design..^_^
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Swarat Ghosh commented:
thanks dude...it will defi. inspire me to do better designs in future !!
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Dan Allen Pantinople commented:
me too if you could give me some pointers...it will definitely help me..cause im still really2x new in designing...^_^
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i like the 2nd one maybe because it doesn't have shadows inside don't like the "productions" part
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the second is great and immediate. try put on the green
thank you for your review chams! ^^ ill do what i can..^^