Dan Allen Pantinople

planetbiz

By Dan Allen Pantinople

   on Dec 17, 2009
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  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 2
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    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    2 Votes
    Last concept is strongest

    Posted on Dec 18, 2009 at 7:58 AM

    The planet is a bit literal however, I would just use a dot instead. I also think you could make the dots a little more subtle. It is certainly a good start though, well done again!

  • Vinicius Machado

    Vinicius Machado

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    • Design: 3
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    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    The 4th is better

    Posted on Dec 18, 2009 at 7:59 PM

    I think that you choose well the colors. I just think that the idea needs a bit more of development.

    Try different tipography... it can help.

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

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    • Design: 3
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    i like the the 3rd one

    Posted on Dec 17, 2009 at 11:56 PM

    the only thing is your globe is not going well with other flat rounded shape..:)

  • Chams Teller

    Chams Teller

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    • Design: 5
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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    the 4th one

    Posted on Dec 18, 2009 at 12:44 AM

    obviously i can feel too that the orignal logo needs changing since its a business company..

    i especially like the 4th one best! however maybe you could use illustrator for the final design for this..

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    • Design: 3
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    1 Vote
    4th but

    Posted on Dec 18, 2009 at 1:09 AM

    drop the underline...

    otherwise all good!

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

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    • Design: 4
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    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Get rid of their design and logo

    Posted on Dec 18, 2009 at 4:34 AM

    I love your own concepts better.

    I prefer the last one, with the line. The font works great too.

  • Jap Sherman

    Jap Sherman

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    the last one...

    Posted on Dec 18, 2009 at 7:58 AM

    id say yours are waay much better than the original! i love your concepts!

  • Ari Suardiyanti

    Ari Suardiyanti

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    • Design: 4
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    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    perfect

    Posted on Jan 06, 2010 at 4:02 AM

    I looked at your designs one by one, I started to like the 3rd, then the 4th, didn't really see any changes except on the "never" color. They look great, except for the line under the planetbiz, the use of it is to separate elements, I was going to point that out, but again, you've fixed it, and now it's all perfect. Great work ;)