Bloom Cookie Bakery Logo

this is ok, it still needs something...

I would probably make both 'o' s flowers, and drop down cookie bakery under the o's and m...

good start...keep going!

Good Overall Idea and Design. I would define the flower concept a little better

The flower can be improved and the size can be increased little bit to get balanced. eager to see the next iteration...

id say dont stop here, you could a lot with this concept..maybe try adding something like a cookie to one or both of your O's.

I don't think the font goes well with the illustration.

either make the font more fun, or the illustration more formal.

• maybe you could share the 'oo' in bloom with the 'oo' in cookie?

Though the idea behind the concept is good, the actual concept isn't working. The flower doesn't look enough like a flower. Try and create an object that looks more like a flower.

While the idea is good, the execution needs work. Why not try something fun and make the flower in Boom be a picture of a flower cookie? Something like: http://images.celebrateexpress.com/mgen/merchandiser/64748.jpg

I like the "Cookie Bakery" font, but not the Bloom font. If you stick with that font though, work on the tracking. The space looks very odd between B & L