Concept Reviews
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In an attempt to be brutally honest, you need to start over on this concept. I'm not sure what the company is, so I can't really give you any direction to go. This screams of a late 80's logo and isn't very memorable.
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maybe you should try to work on the text first, get ideas from logos in the net and start from there...be inspired.
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before you start, just have a look on some interesting logo references like http://logopond.com
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This logo cannot be used on several media because there is too much detail in the towers and you use gradients.
a city doesn't stop suddenly on the left and right. You as a designer should work this out differently. The font doesn't fit either.
But i can see that the company is located in london(?) Have you thought about why you want to express this so badly? maybe you should approach your company from a whole different angle.
Like Dan Allen says: Get inspired :)
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To much going on. At least try to have content contained. Simplify with less complicated element.
